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Life's Journey

Long ago a young boy headed down the trail; bound for the creek with his pole in hand on that warm June day; he hoped not to fail to bring home the catch or at least a tale to tell his friends – the best friends in the land. Even at that age the solitude he enjoyed; the stillness of nature and its beauty abound. Being ever so careful to preserve, and employed good judgement so God’s gift would not be destroyed, and he left nature in its place just as he found. Sixty years later the young boy has matured. Deadlines and commitments have taken their toll, but his love of nature has always endured, and his desire for solitude will never be cured and he searches for answers deep in his soul. He thinks of that day sixty years ago sitting by the creek, on a rock in the sun and friends who have gone and new ones to know and ponders life’s meaning and how we grow and will his conscience be clear when time is done. September 21, 2017

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Date: 8/23/2021 3:18:00 PM
Felt the peace and connection to nature reading your poem John. Also brought back memories of when I was a child and the few times I went fishing with my father. Hugs, Emilia : )
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John Gondolf
Date: 8/23/2021 3:46:00 PM
I can remember fishing in Joe's Creek just like it was yesterday, and that was 64 years ago now, wow, when the hell did I get old? I glad I was able to bring back fond memories for you, Emilia, of time spent with your father. Hugs, John
Date: 7/5/2019 6:39:00 PM
Sometimes, it takes reflection and years to understand certain moments in Life. Even when we become much older- we still have so much to learn. This holds so many moments and emotions. So beautifully written and presented my dear friend. Congratulations on this win. ~ Brandy
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John Gondolf
Date: 7/5/2019 7:15:00 PM
Thank you, Brandy, you are so correct, I am still learning about life and love. I appreciate you and your thoughts. John
Date: 7/5/2019 3:48:00 PM
I loved the vivid imagery in this piece captured by memory John. Very beautiful! Congratulations on your deserving First Placement! : ) xxoo
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John Gondolf
Date: 7/5/2019 4:39:00 PM
Thank you so much, Connie, I appreciate you and your thoughts. All the best. John
Date: 7/5/2019 11:22:00 AM
I could envision you sitting there and it brought back memories of the solitude i used to seek in fishing....nicely penned John, congrats on your win :) hugs
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John Gondolf
Date: 7/5/2019 11:30:00 AM
Thank you, Sandy, I appreciate your warm thoughts. I can remember sitting on that rock like it was yesterday. All the best my friend. John
Date: 7/5/2019 10:07:00 AM
A beautifully penned poem and I have no doubt your conscience will be clear from what I can feel through your poem. Congrats John.
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John Gondolf
Date: 7/5/2019 10:15:00 AM
Thank you so much, Jeanne, I appreciate your kind comments. John
Date: 1/6/2018 10:49:00 AM
What a ponderous write, also a glimpse into your personality and through a childhood hobby. From boy to man, still enjoying nature and solitude. Pretty cool! Love this, John. (Btw. I think you're spoofing us with your photo. You do not look 70. More like 50)
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John Gondolf
Date: 1/6/2018 11:28:00 AM
Thank you for reading this, Rhoda, yes, I do give up a bit of myself in this one. The photo is actually about eight years old and was done professionally so they took out the wrinkles and the bags under my eyes. I still look the same but a little greyer.
Date: 10/21/2017 9:01:00 AM
John, a beautiful write and congratulations on your win in my contest !
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John Gondolf
Date: 10/21/2017 9:39:00 AM
Broken Wings, thank you for the placement, I’m glad you enjoyed my poem. And thank you for sponsoring the contest!
Date: 10/20/2017 11:02:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, John, great write . Hugs Eve ~`*
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John Gondolf
Date: 10/21/2017 5:58:00 AM
Thank you, Eve, glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 10/20/2017 5:50:00 PM
Gorgeous pen John, congratulations on your win, poetry and life with nature by your side :) xomo
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John Gondolf
Date: 10/20/2017 6:37:00 PM
Thank you so much, Maureen, I’m glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 9/21/2017 5:07:00 PM
Excellent poem John. Well done! I can feel the journey taken from then to now :)
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John Gondolf
Date: 9/21/2017 5:23:00 PM
Heidi, thank you so much for your kind words. I've only been writing for four months now and it's nice to know that others appreciate your work. I'm glad you enjoyed my "journey."

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