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For "The Life Acrostic Poetry Contest" by Matt Caliri.

April 18, 2024

L-ife was much better long years ago I-nviting life to days in the sun F-un was foremost, watching ourselves grow E-xpecting days and time we'd out-run W-hen years piled on, we began to doubt I-t was only yesterday we soared T-ime is deceptive, chasing aboutl H-ere we are: grateful we're still aboard W-hen life adds wrinkles into our lives R-ight away, flab is added as well I-nside each smile a small furrow thrives N-ot a pretty one, I'm sad to tell K-issing might only bring about hives L-ate nights will now make your eyelids swell E-xcessive age brings wisdom to lives S-hamefully, we need to rest a spell

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Date: 4/24/2024 10:50:00 PM
Oh so sadly true. Wow you took the contest beyond !
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Date: 4/20/2024 10:58:00 AM
Age indeed adds wisdom to lives, the aged know more about history and stuff . Kudos for a superb poem! >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>><<<<<<<<<<<<<<^^^^^^^^*> Plz also read and comment my newest poem too
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Date: 4/19/2024 1:48:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your creative  Acrostic write. "Good Luck" I say, wrinkles go far away. We both did Life... Have a wonderful spring weekend...............
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Date: 4/19/2024 3:39:00 PM
Good luck to you, too, Sweet Paula.

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