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Life Wings

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Written: December 17, 2023 __________________________________________ With progression of time rebirth of a fresh leaf It's time to ponder. among all forthcoming In oblivion Filling nefarious blanks with lyrical creation of paradox and myth. Setting aside the years. setting aside the fears. throwing away melancholy plethora of lonesome nights. Spreading luminescent wings as a newly-emerged butterfly It burst out of a faint, sanguine cocoon. boarding their final trip of a lifetime between dream-scapes.

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Date: 12/21/2023 3:29:00 PM
Beautifully crafted with so much talent. Bravo.
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Date: 12/20/2023 5:31:00 PM
Wow, the last stanza describes your poetry- "a trip of a lifetime"- very beautiful.
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Date: 12/18/2023 8:39:00 AM
Your poem gives us hopes and dreams. All buried in oblivion will one day come back to life, spread their luminescent wings like butterflies emerging from cocoons and fly off from all confines. The last stanza obliquely states a joyous truth. They will make their final trip, "setting aside the years. setting aside the fears, throwing away melancholy, and the plethora of lonesome nights." Oh so beautiful.....!
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Date: 12/18/2023 4:26:00 AM
Setting aside the years, setting aside the fears, throwing away melancholy plethora of lonesome night-- WOW! inspirational words resonate in this uplifting poem, my friend.
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Date: 12/18/2023 3:22:00 AM
Emerging from the gloom in a flight of New beginnings, Very nicely penned Sotto
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Date: 12/17/2023 9:36:00 PM
Beautiful poem, my friend. Well said my friend. May you and your family have a wonderful Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year. Hugs eve
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Date: 12/17/2023 7:19:00 PM
Imagery impeccable, dear Poet!
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Date: 12/17/2023 10:59:00 AM
Beautiful photo to enhance your beautiful poem. Have a pleasant week, my dear friend. Bill
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Date: 12/17/2023 10:52:00 AM
This would be a good one for the transmutation contest.. Your poem is a great analogy for change and we always want to break free from the cocoon that contains us... always a pleasure to read your poems my friend.
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Date: 12/17/2023 10:29:00 AM
Beautiful dream-scapes poetry Sotto and beautifully read on the recording, lovely picture too… Belle
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Date: 12/17/2023 10:11:00 AM
This poem of many connecting thoughts brings to mind,- the fragility of time.
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