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Life Was Complete

My life was complete, But now it's not. I lost it all, because of my conflict. You made me alive. Now I feel dead. I'm left lying here, Crying in my bed. Life seems worthless. Why should I even try? All I want to do Is lie here and cry. It's been nearly a month, And it still hurts like hell, I don't want this to be our last farewell. I want one last chance To turn it around, Hoping you won't turn me down. All I want to do Is hold you tight, And make all your dreams Come true every night. That once and for all I can make you happy Instead of screaming, yelling, Making life crappy. I'm so sorry for what I have done. I'm getting help and trying to move on. This is coming from my heart. I'm just asking for hope For a fresh, new start. For you are my life. Without you I am nothing So please give it one last chance, And I promise I will make it into something. I love you too much. I can't yet let you go, So let me look into your beautiful brown eyes And tell you I love you so.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 1/26/2016 10:59:00 PM
Sorry you are hurting Dennis, wishing you what is right for you...thank you for sharing :)
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Date: 1/26/2016 5:37:00 PM
Dennis, deep write, the love you have for her reads with an endless feeling. Luv **LINDA
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Date: 1/26/2016 5:03:00 PM
Oh Dennis... Which one is better, which one is worst? Drowning in water or dying of thirst.
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