Marty Owens Poet Free verse

Life Sustenance

Parched dried up desert
Allows cactus to grow in lonely spot
Giving life sustaining liquid  

Or Maybe for  true Haiku:

Parched dried desert.
Cactus grows in lonely spot.
Liquid sustenance.

Thank you Raul!!!

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Carol Sunshine Brown October 6, 2009 at 3:09 PM Martin, about the question you asked about the Halloween contest---it is over and the winners have been picked. So sorry my friend. Love, Carol

Doris Culverhouse October 6, 2009 at 2:12 PM nicely penned, thanks for your comments on my work:)

Savannah Rose Harper October 6, 2009 at 1:01 PM very nice my friend thanks for commenting!

Carol Sunshine Brown October 6, 2009 at 9:28 AM I enjoyed reading your excellent poetry today. Thank you Martin. Love, Carol

River Anton October 5, 2009 at 7:59 PM Beautiful. Like Krystal said, this made me imagine the cactus. Using such a limited amount of words to paint a vivid picture. That's a gift. Keep writing.

Krystal Cochrane October 5, 2009 at 7:54 PM Your words took my imagination to that lonely cactus and it looked so bright in contrast to the "Parched dried up desert" (loved that line--great description). Reminded me of how amazing all aspects of nature are, thank you. ~KC~