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Life Sustenance

Parched dried up desert Allows cactus to grow in lonely spot Giving life sustaining liquid Or Maybe for true Haiku: Parched dried desert. Cactus grows in lonely spot. Liquid sustenance. Thank you Raul!!!

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/6/2009 3:09:00 PM

Martin, about the question you asked about the Halloween contest---it is over and the winners have been picked. So sorry my friend. Love, Carol

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 10/6/2009 2:12:00 PM

nicely penned, thanks for your comments on my work:)

Savannah Rose Harper

Date: 10/6/2009 1:01:00 PM

very nice my friend thanks for commenting!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/6/2009 9:28:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your excellent poetry today. Thank you Martin. Love, Carol

River Anton

Date: 10/5/2009 7:59:00 PM

Beautiful. Like Krystal said, this made me imagine the cactus. Using such a limited amount of words to paint a vivid picture. That's a gift. Keep writing.

Krystal Cochrane

Date: 10/5/2009 7:54:00 PM

Your words took my imagination to that lonely cactus and it looked so bright in contrast to the "Parched dried up desert" (loved that line--great description). Reminded me of how amazing all aspects of nature are, thank you. ~KC~