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Life Stories In Wood

Storm clouds build and advance,
as thunder stampedes the air.
Reverberations caress my bones,
as I bow my head in prayer.

As I raise my face to rain,
that falls as tears on hallowed ground.
My eyes behold proud Totem poles,
touching sky and yet earth bound.

Their carved reverence, I can feel,
as they stand amid fierce winds.
Along side cold stones that offer names,
life stories these Totems lend.

A celebration of life in wood,
these sentinels against dark skies.
I stand within the storm in awe,
of their beauty, where death resides.



Paula Swanson
8/12/2011
For the contest Totems In The Darkening Sky
Sponsored by Francine Roberts
Placement: 3rd
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
August 23, 2011 at 1:32 PM
Congratulations on your placement in Francine Roberts' "Totems in the Darkening Sky" contest Paula. Love, Carol
Ramsdale Avatar
August 20, 2011 at 4:16 PM
Congratulations on your win! Great job! Caryl Ramsdale
Gorelick Avatar
August 20, 2011 at 10:07 AM
Wow, well done. I like the last stanza alot. congrats. BG
Horne Avatar
August 20, 2011 at 8:55 AM
Many congrats to you, Paula : )
Williams Avatar
August 20, 2011 at 3:39 AM
hey Paula, congrats on your win David
Song Avatar
August 20, 2011 at 12:24 AM
Paula- Francine must have been biting her nails while judging this super competitive contest. The entries are awesome....yours is a true beauty! A nice alliteration --the thunder stampeding the air...as tho' the air doesn't stand a chance! Such talent, lady! Gwendolen
Quigley Avatar
August 20, 2011 at 12:15 AM
I like this very much. Congratulations on your win
Sweetheart Avatar
August 19, 2011 at 11:48 PM
Congrats Paula on your super third place win in Totem Contest with this grand write my friend..luv..
Roberts Avatar
August 19, 2011 at 10:16 PM
congrats on your third place win in the contest Paula, wonderful poem
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