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Life Spent All Alone

Life spent all alone, my heart was not filled With love to keep me warm, on the cold days Instead there were races, memories spilled To keep the pain alive, so many ways All the fierce storms to battle in the years So much time spent, just surviving to live Sometimes all numb, other times weeping tears While still trying to find so much more to give Now, my boat is battered on the shoreline There is no-one around to see me here I would like to believe I will be fine Maybe this island will erase my fear Life spent all alone has taught me so much There is no escape, but only a crutch 6/11/19 Placed 1st with others for Choices Poetry Contest. Photo #2

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Date: 6/21/2019 7:21:00 AM
Congrats on a fine win Heidi..
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/21/2019 7:53:00 AM
Thank you Joseph. I appreciate it :)
Date: 6/20/2019 3:20:00 PM
Back with congrats Heidi--kudos for the #1 spot.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/20/2019 3:33:00 PM
Thanks so much Vijay! :)
Date: 6/14/2019 11:45:00 AM
An island to erase fear, I know of a place... Beautiful, Heidi, good luck in the contest.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/14/2019 11:48:00 AM
I am sure you do Sandy. Thank you :)
Date: 6/13/2019 3:38:00 PM
how beautifully pensive i clutched unto every word, heidi... huggs
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/13/2019 3:40:00 PM
Nette, thank you for being so kind and offering support :)
Date: 6/13/2019 2:19:00 PM
- You describe the fate of many people ... a wonderful and ... heartbreaking writing, Heidi - Best wishes in the contest ... I would think it is a top winning poem - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/13/2019 2:23:00 PM
Hi. Thank you. I was hoping, I described it as such. Your feedback is appreciated :)
Date: 6/13/2019 12:24:00 PM
"Life spent all alone has taught me so much There is no escape, but only a crutch" - these are my favourite lines. :) Beautiful write :)
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/13/2019 12:31:00 PM
Hi Thank you for your kind feedback I appreciate it :)
Date: 6/12/2019 7:43:00 AM
You captured that photo in your words and gave it a voice..a meaningful write, Heidi.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/12/2019 7:47:00 AM
That is great to hear. I appreciate your visit and comment. Thank you Vijay :)
Date: 6/11/2019 11:52:00 PM
I wish I didn't, but I relate to this and you captured it so well that I'm in awe of this write. Your words got inside me and tugged where I'd rather not feel at times but that's because it is an excellent poem! A Wow ... CayCay
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/12/2019 6:49:00 AM
There are so many challenges in life that we go through CayCay. So, I can understand. I appreciate your kind feedback on this. Thank you very much :)

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