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Life Song

Sweet song of summer is over, Did you end your verse? Did you leave participles dangling for better or for worse? The mete of man is production in one form or another. If you spend all your time wrangling in contentious bother, when the final whistle warns you to gather for your pay, you may find your tally wanting, in need of longer stay. But the die, in stone has been cast. has nought for you to nod. Your future looms ever daunting, answering to your God ~//~ Modified Quatrain, 8 line verse Rhyming lines are 2 and 4, 6 and 8, 3 and 7 Alternate long and short lines For Constance the Rambling Poet 11 th in “Create your own form contest” ©. Nov 07, 2010 Charles Henderson

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Date: 11/23/2010 2:46:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in this fine contest..Sara
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Date: 11/15/2010 8:47:00 PM
I love your created form. It is one of the more lyrical I am seeing . Congrats, Charles and also on your doing so well in the poetry soup round. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 11/15/2010 10:08:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Charles in Constance's contest "Create Your Own Form, Maybe?". Love, Carol
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Date: 11/14/2010 11:57:00 PM
Charles ... Congrats on big win in the contest....Luv/Best wishes.....Hitendra Mehta
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Date: 11/14/2010 1:30:00 PM
Great form Charles and great poem as well. Colngratulations onyour win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 11/14/2010 8:49:00 AM
The poem itself is beautifully descriptive, Charles, and the form you created by changing the quatrain rhymes is very unique. Congratulations on your success in the contest. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 11/14/2010 8:28:00 AM
Hey, you are my name's sake. you are highly talented too. congrats on your win. love, Lightening Ink.
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Date: 11/14/2010 7:37:00 AM
Congrats Charles on your wonderful winning poem in Constance's contest with this perfect entry.. enjoy another big victory my friend on this happy Sunday ..with luv to Carolyn as well.luv..this happy Sunday..
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Date: 11/14/2010 4:20:00 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win, Charles
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Date: 11/7/2010 2:57:00 PM
Beautiful write!
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Date: 11/7/2010 2:16:00 PM
Quite an innovation of the quatrain describing the activities of the summer, Charle
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