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Life Mirrored Before the Night

Reflecting on his life and on his deeds,
he thinks how like this ending time of day,
his life is mirrored here among the reeds
beneath peach twilight clouds tinged brownish grey.

Yes, like these clouds, his life was peachy when
he started out. But challenges arose.
He couldn’t deal with them, and it was then
this peaceful life of solitude he chose.

Uncomplicated – like a placid lake -
is how he's lived, and with a narrow view.
For no big chances ever did he take
while drifting like a simple small canoe.

As long as there remains day’s last gold light,
he’ll bask until he’s swallowed by black night.

For Anoucheka Gangabissoon's In the Mirror of Life Poetry Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Goldsmith Avatar
May 14, 2022 at 9:07 AM
Congratulations on your win. A "Wonderful" write and picture. Have a great/blessed~day/weekend.......................
Watt Avatar
April 6, 2020 at 5:08 PM
Another gorgeous sonnet - I love what you drew from this picture. The metaphor of a small canoe for his life choices, his simplicity mirrored by a placid lake, his closing days represented by dusk becoming night. Also enjoyed the peach/peachy twist. There might also be a twinge of sadness buried in here, too, about not taking bigger risks in life. Congrats on your win! Hugs ~ John
Dietrich Avatar
April 9, 2020 at 3:58 PM
glad you noticed what was "buried" in there, John. You are ast ute.
Kauffman Avatar
April 6, 2020 at 4:52 PM
Andrea. Beautiful sonnet about choices we make and how they impact our lives. The last lines of metaphor are simply quite stunning. Congratulations on your win.
Rowe Avatar
June 22, 2019 at 7:57 PM
Simply phenomenal. Like a great sonnet, that last couplet really grips you and drives the finality of his chosen solitude home. A very fitting first place finish.
Kendrick Avatar
June 22, 2019 at 4:46 PM
I enjoyed reading this one Andrea. It is very descriptive of the picture but with a life of its own. I hope you have an awesome summer with much enjoyment with grandchildren and some fantastic movies that I have seen advertised. Sara
Mcgee Avatar
June 22, 2019 at 6:24 AM
Wow, "his life is mirrored here among the reeds" lovely write Andrea. Congratulations! Jeanne
Cozart Avatar
June 21, 2019 at 8:30 AM
This is beautiful, Andrea, so introspective and moody. Congrats.
May Avatar
June 21, 2019 at 7:15 AM
Very nicely penned Andrea..Congrats on your win
Laurie Avatar
May 30, 2019 at 10:22 PM
G'day Andrea … no words but one - wonderful - thank you Andrea - Lindsay
Godwin Avatar
May 30, 2019 at 7:04 PM
Oh, wow, FEAR made his decision to live in solitude otherwise I would envy his simple existence spent in nature. This is like being a fly on the wall in a man's life, a reclusive one for the wrong reasons. This hasn't been judged yet, I'm thinking. None of the pics moved me or woke my muse so I'm adrift on the water and contentedly so. Period needed after canoe. Love you ... CayCay
Krutsinger Avatar
May 23, 2019 at 1:30 PM
Wonderful imagery Andrea. Soup mail in a second my friend. "Uncomplicated – like a placid lake - is how he's lived, and with a narrow view. For no big chances ever did he take while drifing like a simple small canoe" It makes me feel like I drifting casually.
Rigoler Avatar
May 23, 2019 at 5:52 AM
Modern sonnets are not easy to write. Many who try usually sound archaic. This one doesn't, a merit to your skill of avoiding this pitfall. Enjoyed reading it. / M
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 22, 2019 at 5:10 PM
I agree with Kurt Andrea. Your imagery is a stand out in this piece. It should do great in the contest. : ) xxoo
Ravidas Avatar
May 22, 2019 at 7:10 AM
Peach twilight clouds tinged brownish grey. Oh, that's what I like in poetry. And the gold light swallowed by black night too.
Pandit Avatar
May 22, 2019 at 6:13 AM
That small canoe reminisces of the past ..an impressive write, Andrea..much enjoyed your interpretation of the photo.
Beilschmidt Sr. Avatar
May 21, 2019 at 10:43 PM
Sounds like a great life to me.
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
May 21, 2019 at 8:05 PM
Your essence resonates throughout your well-tuned muse concluding with the contrast of a 24-hour period Andrea, ~~best wishes indeed, Aloha wk
Mchattie Avatar
May 21, 2019 at 6:40 PM
It is a wonderful thing when a person makes peace with their surroundings. Great poem. Wonderful. Have a good day.
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