Life Is What You Make It

Birth naked as the day, I lay upon the floor cover less, chill, eyes fluttering, closed, aware... inward I stare, counting chest rises, in despair. Fear of onward life is more than I can ignore. Outside, a flutter of wings seeks to explore, the haunting howl of wolf, mating calls taunt, beware, both harbingers of death; I grasp, each breath of air, sending ripples through a shaking fearful core. Moonlight cloaks my form, and heaven guards my plight. Covers tossed, comfort shorn, I search for tales to return to me a bit of warmth and light. A hoot, a yip, a melody, which prevails to remind me of the paths beyond that invite, for I am a dreamer tossed on dreams of death.
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Lamoureux Avatar
May 2, 2014 at 7:15 AM
I am not aware of the contest but it appears you are on the winners list. Congratulations. A very effective piece.
A   Avatar
March 19, 2014 at 4:48 PM
Debbie, It is what it is, and I love what you made of this poem... Congrats. ~have a nice day~ <3 LINDA
Onclaud Avatar
March 19, 2014 at 8:41 AM
a keeper this is. debbie.. this should have rated higher... applause to you for a shining win!.. huggs
Andresen Avatar
March 19, 2014 at 4:41 AM
- Congratulations on your winning poem in the contest: "Life is what YOU make it!" Sponsored by: Dave Wood. - Wonderful win, Debbie ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Mehta Avatar
March 18, 2014 at 10:47 PM
Congratulations on your winning poem in the contest on Life, debbie
A  Avatar
March 18, 2014 at 9:22 PM
Debbie, congrats on your winning poem. ~SKAT~
Jones Avatar
March 18, 2014 at 8:51 PM
Wow..now that is different and exciting...a big winner for me...congratulations Debbie
Richards Avatar
March 18, 2014 at 8:25 PM
I love that you have taken your own twist on this contest, and made it unique ....it is your own, in a lovely, mysterious, and haunting sonnet!! You are always amazing!
Parker Avatar
March 18, 2014 at 5:49 PM
Love the artistry of your poem, poetry is a word I would use..congrats on your win
Kendrick Avatar
March 12, 2014 at 5:32 AM
Well, passionate work..Never thought that it would change so toward the end..Thanks for the visits to my page..Sara
Dunn Avatar
March 11, 2014 at 10:03 PM
A haunting write here, well written but very spooky for you, is everything okay, just wondering sorry i have not been on much lately but my lab top has been giving me heck. cheri
Thirtyseven Avatar
March 10, 2014 at 3:00 AM
Ps- can I tweet this? From there we will hopefully see the reason as to why, extra reads. Then we can move to the how. Oh and have you ever heard of the forms pensee, and rondelet? Cheers, Scott.
Thirtyseven Avatar
March 10, 2014 at 2:58 AM
Awesome. You begin in such an engaging place, and take us from there. Bleak and unforgiving maybe, but a great read, which I'm sure we can all relate to.
Goff Avatar
March 9, 2014 at 9:52 AM
Deb, this speaks to me as one soul to another....briefly but our time fought here....with hearts tethered to eternal light....thanks! Jimbo
Chircop Avatar
March 8, 2014 at 3:21 PM
To be a dreamer tossed on dreams of death is somehow sad..but to seek the flutter of a wing is somehow hopeful.May you always find comfort in those tales which are.happy ending..and remember..the melody will always find your heart sweet Deborah.A meaningful poem..Big big hug ma.
Andresen Avatar
March 8, 2014 at 6:24 AM
- Lovely and true, Debbie - Have a great weekend and a nice woman day today :))) - oxox // Anne-Lise ;)
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