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Body exposed and bare, sharp pins causing much sweat then cared for and tended, the bath is warm and wet comfort acting so surprising toiling then giving an uprising a world where negative and positive sing a duet

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Date: 2/13/2016 2:52:00 PM
tres bien, I like this poem
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Funom Makama
Date: 2/27/2016 7:24:00 AM
Thank you so much Etienne
Date: 2/11/2016 11:28:00 AM
Beautifully written.
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Funom Makama
Date: 2/27/2016 7:24:00 AM
Thank you so much Tonyna
Date: 2/7/2016 7:48:00 PM
That is life, we must take the good with the bad, and both opposites can be expected throughout the years we live... An interesting poem you've written here, Funom. Well done!
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Funom Makama
Date: 2/11/2016 8:37:00 AM
Thank you very much Kelly
Date: 2/7/2016 4:35:00 AM
An excellent Limerick my friend! According to Greek mythology, when Zeus decided to create the world he changed himself to Eros and then he united the opposites in a harmonious whole! Here you show this opposition which is very true, my friend, Funom!
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Funom Makama
Date: 2/11/2016 8:37:00 AM
Thank you very much Demetrios
Date: 2/7/2016 2:34:00 AM
Lol nice! Keep 'em coming...
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Funom Makama
Date: 2/11/2016 8:37:00 AM
Thank you very much njeri
Date: 2/6/2016 11:39:00 PM
You are doing goof on these limericks... linda
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Funom Makama
Date: 2/11/2016 8:38:00 AM
your expression sends a sensation of warmth into my system. Thank you Lindsy

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