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Life Death and Taxi's

The sweet beeps wake me another cold Saturday morn death she lost again letting go thoughts of depression decompressing the contemplation raining down fog lifts for a minute as I search bloody knees and lips for traces of sanity ice packs freeze an already stagnant mind wandering bout the abyss freedom calls in the form of an hourglass as last grains fall time is running out excuses to live have been copied whistles blow the mundane march clouds cover taxi's roll on by
Back for today Maybe longer : ))

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 3/6/2018 9:26:00 AM
I was thrilled to see new posts from you Tim. You're such a sweetie! ~a friend from the past
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Date: 2/27/2018 5:45:00 PM
Oh, Tim, were you not able to be here because of adverts?? How in the world does that happen?? Let me read your poem now.
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Date: 2/26/2018 6:08:00 PM
I’m glad you are back! We have to keep sharing and reading to drive the motivation to create. This is excellent!
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Date: 2/26/2018 3:21:00 PM
Not at all what I expected but so good to have you back among us Tim. We were depressed when you left us.
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Date: 2/26/2018 2:55:00 PM
I'm always thankful I wake to hear the alarm Tim, welcome back Tim, Romantic write next please I've missed them ! Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/26/2018 2:34:00 PM
Glad to see you back!! Good write.
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Date: 2/26/2018 2:21:00 PM
And life goes on, however endangered a species traditional Taxis are in our modern Über age. Fabulous ink. xomo!
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Date: 2/26/2018 1:55:00 PM
Welcome back Tim. Well expressed poem you have written. Keep it up :)
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Date: 2/26/2018 1:43:00 PM
- A sad picture of what's happening in everyday life, Tim - (please do not leave, Tim) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/26/2018 1:46:00 PM
I don't wish to leave the adverts have just been maddening. I couldn't read the poems or comment properly because they were covered.
Date: 2/26/2018 1:35:00 PM
Very sad Tim. Nothing has happen to tomorrow.
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