Life Dance

With a thousand thunder bolts thoughts abound inside my head No questions to fit the answers No answers to fit the questions Problems unresolved Promises broken Hearts break and tear like old parchment Light! Glorious light Lifts the shadows in my soul and sets me free Like dancing fairies, thoughts abound with possibilities Life gently rolls on and begins anew.

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Beata Agustin

Date: 4/28/2024 8:36:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/11/2016 9:22:00 AM

Sandra,, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry, LINDA

Debbie Duncan

Date: 6/7/2012 8:16:00 PM

Very well done,,,,, welcome to poetrysoup ,,,, keep writing,,,, blessings of the day !

Lisa Cooper

Date: 6/7/2012 8:09:00 PM

wonderful addition to the soup!

Peggy Caulfield

Date: 6/7/2012 1:35:00 PM

Welcome to poetry soup.

Sandra Froc
Date: 6/7/2012 1:41:00 PM

Thank you:)

Richard Palmer

Date: 6/7/2012 12:16:00 PM

live the new life,follow the glorious light,nice write and a warm welcome to the soup Sandra

Sandra Froc
Date: 6/7/2012 1:42:00 PM

Thank you:)

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/7/2012 12:00:00 PM

A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Sandra. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol

Sandra Froc
Date: 6/7/2012 1:43:00 PM

Thank you

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/7/2012 11:29:00 AM

Welcome to P-Soup Sandra, you have written a very good poem today.Thank you for sharing it.Hope you will write, read and comments back a lot of poem with us here. - Have fun with writing poem and get friends.Sending you love from Norway and me Anne-Lise - Have a lovely day in sunshine and love.

Sandra Froc
Date: 6/7/2012 11:42:00 AM

Thank you for your lovely and positive comment:) Warmest wishes for a lovely day as well.