Life

the dying red rose petals fall in dirt they blend to rise again is there really sin T Reams

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/20/2015 10:38:00 PM

so interesting, that question at the end!! I think of course there is, and yet the image begs the question.

Tammy Reams
Date: 3/21/2015 7:27:00 AM

Thank you Andrea. I agree but all things come back up.

Constance La France

Date: 3/20/2015 7:51:00 AM

Tammy, this is a beautiful haiku, I love that last line, a well written 7 and thanks for visiting my poem, rest now . . .

Tammy Reams
Date: 3/20/2015 7:56:00 AM

Thank you Broken Wings. This was my first time doing a haiku and I still have few things wrong with it but I will get better. Thank you again.