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Life

Life starts at birth,
 
then it begins to unfold.
 
As time passes,
 
the world shows it's face.
 
When we think of birth,
 
we often think of a new born baby.
 
Life starts at birth,
 
for all living things.
 
A pretty flower starts with a simple seed,
 
birth begins to unfold each petal.
 
Life comes with many twists and turns,
 
like a flower garden we too have weeds.
 
Weeds of thoughts and fears,
 
weeds of people that need to be pulled.
 
Life starts at birth,
 
death ends it for all living things.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 10/19/2023 1:50:00 PM
Lovely Paula! reminds me of my 2nd grandchild due in March from my daughter in Portland, keep the ink flowin' Paula! jimbo
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 10/20/2023 10:44:00 AM
Good to see you here. Glad you found my "Life" write to be lovely. Congratulations and good luck with the new baby. Yes, keep the ink flowing. Have a wonderful day/weekend writing away..................
Date: 10/19/2023 10:44:00 AM
- A wonderful poem about the path of life ... compared to flowers and weeds ... (flowers and weeds ... as in my poem I posted yesterday ) - If this is for contest I wish you luck, Paula :) - hugs
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 10/20/2023 10:38:00 AM
 Good to see you here. Thanks for your luck. Glad you found my "Life" write to be wonderful. Hugs... Have a wonderful day/weekend writing away..................
Date: 10/19/2023 9:49:00 AM
Life~Date Written:10/19/2023
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