Life

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On our way through life We frequently face silence and mayhem No one can predict our future luck. We have both death and newborns We can have achievements and failures We'll draw stuck in a swamp sporadically Be willing to strain intriguing recent things Our time on Earth is quite limited We beget a lot of riddles and insights No matter if we confederate or not We will all endure comparable adversity. We'll all bear it through to the other side In the finale, we will all be hailed in one place.

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Vijay Pandit

Date: 5/25/2023 5:19:00 AM

True--we get our share of grief and also joy. Your poem is a wonderful insight on life.

Yann Rolland

Date: 5/25/2023 12:11:00 AM

same destiny for everyone, it is good to hear about what we all share, nice and touching penning, thanks

Valsa George

Date: 5/24/2023 8:25:00 PM

Wise ruminations on life and its unpredictability. All of us will have to pass through many ordeals in life. But somehow we will reach the other shore of etenal bliss. Thank you dear friend for sharing your mature views on life.

Bill Baker

Date: 5/24/2023 3:39:00 PM

Insightful and alluring. Full of wisdom and hope, my friend. I've often thought that we all go through the same challenges in life ... just different things challenge each of us in the same way. You're on a roll here. Write On! A poet friend in Texas, Bill