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Levitating Leviathans-CA

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Acquisitive anguish arising within my acceptant abyss The creatures that lurk within the deep Are without hope and sustenance I awake aimlessly with thoughts that have gone awry Every nuance of my being accumulating auspicious hell For amidst the atrocious abdominous appetites I linger in a lachrymal graveyard levitating leviathans Craving for more absolutistic ambient assuage Adoring and absorbing your aesthetic appetency Accepting your allure of ambitious alienation And yet I absolve you from all your atrocities. Oct.08.2019 Crazy A's Poetry Sponsored by: John Hamilton Music...Deep Chill Mix by 4lienetic With Virtual Female Voice Placed 3'rd...Thank You

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Date: 11/4/2019 8:17:00 PM
Well, fellow jigger, we showed out a little bit, huh? Man, that vocabulary of yours reads like a mini-webster dictionary! I know what leviathans are but I never knew they levitated! lol I remember one time during my drinking days I could fly but when I landed, I wished I could levitate. Glad I gave up the brew -- soon be 38 years! This is a FAVE for me! Jig on good buddy!!
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Date: 11/3/2019 7:31:00 PM
Ahh see bro bro I knew you would win! Congrats and I guess we are keeping it in the family! Great work! Sissy is quite pleased!;) lol! Great win WW!;) love and light!
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Date: 11/3/2019 7:15:00 PM
wonderful write for the contest...not surprised to see you on the winner's list, congratulations!
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Date: 11/3/2019 6:35:00 PM
This was an experience WW, I always enjoy your cerebral writing, I must say the lingering in the lachrymal graveyard, levitating leviathans is impressive, guaranteed that's never been written before! Congrats on a top podium finish!
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Date: 10/9/2019 8:00:00 PM
Ahhh dang bro bro there goes any chance for me in the contest!;) but I would not mind losing to you dear bro bro! Amazingly written!;)
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Date: 10/9/2019 6:15:00 AM
My favorite line: I linger in a lachrymal graveyard levitating leviathans.
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Date: 10/9/2019 12:21:00 AM
I don't think I'm good at this A thing but tried. You did a great job with all those A's... Wish you all the best in the contest. Prayers and much love and appreciation, Gina
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Date: 10/8/2019 11:42:00 PM
Awesome ~ your writing is exceptional, once again, and the pairing with this female voice is perfectly eerie!! Great job, ^WW^ ~ good luck!
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