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letting it out

i start my piece my fingers dance across the black and white keys they carry on the slow, jazz beat it gets louder and faster till it becomes slow again my fingers land on the keys over and over again till the music stops with a dramatic finish and when i leave the piano i’m not angry anymore.

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Date: 6/9/2025 7:57:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 6/6/2025 10:32:00 PM
if you have any suggestions please comment them!! i’m new to this.
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Olivia Daugherty
Date: 6/9/2025 10:17:00 PM
I’m also pretty new to this, I’ve only been on here a couple months. I love your poems, you have lots of talent <3

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