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Letters From Paris

I wrote a letter
With teardrops from my heart
I walk the streets of Antoinette
My mind dances with Baudelaire
Love flutters as the pigeon’s wings on statues
I see them, so close and feel the emptiness
Like the cold stone upon which their wings rest

My wine glass is empty
Then full
Then empty
My veins are red like bloodshot eyes
I am tired
Confessions made
I cried

As I walk across the bridge of god
Over the seine
Notre dame stares back, am I insane?
Have I been alone all this time?
Perdu, in time, perdu inside my wine
Hidden words and lost letters
You shall never see
Tossed thoughts in salad dressings
Away away as the river decides to run

I look back inside black and white photos
How did I become this way
How did I become the stray?
Fallen spirit, burning heart
Completely and utterly torn apart

I stare at the Eiffel tower
A mighty spear, that pierces me
Into the million lovers of gay Paris
Angels weep, pain flows
The blood of time, the blood that becomes the wine
The pain, inside of me
For all the lost letters
Mother and father never did see
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Sergi Avatar
October 7, 2019 at 9:02 AM
Hi Arthur: I am totally in awe of this poem, especially the last stanza, "I stare at the Eiffel Tower, a mighty spear that pierces me". Such imagery!!
Lariviere Avatar
February 13, 2016 at 2:42 PM
Je vois mon ami Baudelaire ici, très bon
Bateman Avatar
June 5, 2015 at 8:07 AM
Magnificent write Arthur!! Your words are quite descriptive and give the reader the actual sense of being there with you as you talk about the themes. Paris is indeed a fantastic city. It's been a while since I've visited. (I believe you know that I live in Germany.) Enjoyed this one immensely!! Best Wishes, Gary
Vaso Avatar
June 5, 2015 at 2:13 PM
Thanks Gary! Then you have less of an excuse as I for not visiting more!!!! The city of poets!!!!! Cheers!
Dietrich Avatar
May 29, 2015 at 4:40 PM
gosh, I just read your note to me how you have an apt in paris. I am so jealous!!!
Vaso Avatar
May 29, 2015 at 8:56 PM
If only I could get there more often!!!
Makama Avatar
May 28, 2015 at 10:16 AM
Great lines with majestic eloquence.. Your meandering of words still did not prevent your peice from giving out its message. This is an absolute 7!
Vaso Avatar
May 29, 2015 at 9:39 PM
Thanks Funom!
Roberts Avatar
May 23, 2015 at 10:54 PM
So moving my friend....Seren. Soupmail
Vaso Avatar
May 24, 2015 at 9:24 PM
Thanks Seren, checked didn't see one?
Adel  Avatar
May 21, 2015 at 8:42 PM
Very touching,Arthur, enjoyed your poem :)
Vaso Avatar
May 24, 2015 at 9:23 PM
Thank you Mohamed!!
O.J. Hunt Avatar
May 20, 2015 at 7:21 PM
Excellent 'sweet-sorrow' Arthur, I'm going to fave this --- most definately! Keith;-)
Vaso Avatar
May 24, 2015 at 9:23 PM
Thank you so much Kieth, always so nice to hear from you!
Pinet Avatar
May 19, 2015 at 1:54 PM
This is a beautiful poem, described with feelings written from the heart and edited by the soul. The words you used to make your feelings come alive are an eloquent tribute to your love of Paris. Emile. #7
Vaso Avatar
May 24, 2015 at 9:21 PM
You are very kind Emile thank you!!!
Dietrich Avatar
May 18, 2015 at 10:43 PM
wow, this is amazing! You are sure bringing out your serious side lately, and this one I have to FAVE!!! I visited back in '74 and can think of no other city I would love to revisit more!
Vaso Avatar
May 24, 2015 at 9:19 PM
Thanks, I have an apartment right downtown I stay at, and I love it there!!!!
Dietrich Avatar
May 18, 2015 at 10:41 PM
How cool that you saw my hourglass move!! I love Paris (the city, not the people. Let me see what this one is about now)
Vaso Avatar
May 24, 2015 at 9:19 PM
Thanks Andrea, the people are nice as well, a lot has changed!!!! However Paris is also a city of poets, that I do love!!!!!
Deschler Avatar
May 18, 2015 at 9:43 PM
Feelings of desperation and melancholy flow within these lines. The vivid images of Paris just takes me there... Another excellent write, Arthur!
Vaso Avatar
May 18, 2015 at 9:45 PM
Thank you so much Kelly, is one of my favorite cities!
Onclaud Avatar
May 18, 2015 at 1:40 PM
what a poignant work creating a sensitive mood all the way.. wonderful, arthur.. huggs
Vaso Avatar
May 18, 2015 at 7:14 PM
Thanks nette :) xxx
La France Avatar
May 18, 2015 at 11:56 AM
Arthur, how sadly beautiful is your write, I wanted to weep, your talent is overwhelming, 7 and thanks for visiting my poem, the storm
Vaso Avatar
May 18, 2015 at 7:14 PM
and thank you Broken Wings!
Smith Avatar
May 18, 2015 at 11:52 AM
So beautiful and tragic Arthur....I feel your tragedy poems say so much about love....a fav
Vaso Avatar
May 18, 2015 at 7:14 PM
Thanks Tim!!
Karim Avatar
May 18, 2015 at 12:46 AM
I enjoyed your poem. It's so different and I like how you are writing a poem about the letters from Paris.
Vaso Avatar
May 18, 2015 at 11:16 AM
Thank you so much Ayesha
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