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Letter To My Mother

Did I bid goodbye to you, or, you said goodbye to me? Did I know you well as my mother at the age of three? Your touches and hugs, and kisses seem fresh, even today, Leaving me alone, why did you, yet, within a grave, stay...? Why did you not have the patience to live a bit longer? To lead me to church and school so that I'd have grown stronger! As calves cry out to cows or kids cry out to goats, I heard, Infants call out to their mothers as chicks of any bird...! I found mothers cooking, feeding, bathing, drying their kids, Didn't kids annoy their mothers with many bothering bids? To them all, dear mother, their mothers became true heroes, My father, though could not cent percent, to fill your place rose...! Choices of friends of their children, I found, the mothers made, Though birds of feathers, nature knew, sought feathers of their shade; How much did the cooking of their mothers the kids relish...! I know, to me, here on earth, you could better embellish...! I know, as most of my friends are fortunate, I am not, To tell you: 'You're pretty, or, 'I owe you a lot; Or to complement your voice, or the universe in you, Or you're my best friend, and I'm inspired by all that you do...! All these said I must declare, Mother, your spirit abides, In every moment of my life and in each step it hides; It's hence, like the strongest of trees near clear streams I flourish, I proliferate; because it's in your love I nourish...!!! 20 April 2023 Letter To My Mother Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Anoucheka Gangabissoon Rhymes Checked At: Rhymes Zone Syllables Checked At: How Many Syllables

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Date: 5/17/2023 11:42:00 AM
Hello Chris. Congratulations on your winning. How profound is your poem. Pitty that she died when you were still starting. Those are the mistakes of life that we have to learn to face. Don' t worry, because she always will be alive in your heart. My greetings and a big hug
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Date: 5/17/2023 7:37:00 AM
Christuraj, this vividly descriptive, deeply moving poem has touched me to my soul. CONGRATS on your well-deserved win! Janice
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Date: 5/17/2023 6:14:00 AM
Wow, Christuraj! Losing a mom at any age hurts…some hurt, as you have said, all too early, having yo observe other mothers (wow!!) My daughter’s friend lost her mom before she ended high school. Her dad was taking her to get a prom dress and had a slight accident. God gave me the good pleasure to take two daughters (the adoptee and mine) to look for dresses. Oh my heart!!! Congratulations, dear one!
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 5/17/2023 7:09:00 AM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Date: 5/17/2023 6:12:00 AM
Dear Christuraj, Your poem depicts perfectly how a child of three must have felt, losing his mother. I am very sad if this is real from your life...hard to imagine that experience. You have created a wonderful poetic tribute to your mother, with your gifted pen - she would be very proud of her son. Congratulations on your well-deserved top win. The poem in rhymes is an incredible example of your poetic talent. I am moved to tears. To my Faves.
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 5/17/2023 7:08:00 AM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Date: 5/17/2023 12:10:00 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... making me nostalgic of my dearest Mom. God bless you.
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 5/17/2023 7:07:00 AM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Date: 5/16/2023 7:30:00 PM
Literally I am moved to tears. I can imagine what a child of three must have missed when it lost its mother at that tender age. A touching tribute to your mother, dear Chris. My mother died at the age of 93. Still I felt, my world tottered with her death. Congratulations on your first place win.
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 5/16/2023 8:06:00 PM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Date: 5/16/2023 7:16:00 PM
Great poem, Alex, You depicted the love for your mother perfectly, Congrats o your podium win.
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 5/16/2023 8:05:00 PM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Date: 5/16/2023 11:14:00 AM
Nice. Deserves first place,
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 5/16/2023 8:05:00 PM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Date: 5/16/2023 10:03:00 AM
Dear Christuraj, I'm sorry you were so young when you lost your mother. I was, too. It's hard growing up without a mom. Your poem is very lovely. Congratulations!
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 5/16/2023 10:14:00 AM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!

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