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Letter To God

"If you love God truly, you will never trouble him" Dear lord, Sitting on my desk, a pen in hand I was planning to write a letter to you, but my mind become blank, thoughtless What to write? What can l tell you? Aren't you the all knowing one An epitome of perfection One who loves me absolutely What can I ask you? I know what ever you do you do for my good If you give me miseries there is strong reason behind it which my small mind cannot comprehend Thanks a lot. Your errant child Date: 12/2/2020 Contest Name : Christmas Sponsor : Regina McIntosh

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Date: 12/3/2020 7:20:00 AM
Rama this is very clever and very right! What can we actually ask God! what material possession is worth more than the deep wisdom of knowing him! Hindu philosophy! I doubt the idea will appeal to the materialistic Western philosophy! All the best in the contest.
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Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 12/3/2020 10:04:00 AM
It did not. You were right. I did not win. But " what material possession is worth more than the deep wisdom of knowing him! "so true. I agree. Thanks for reading and comments. Enjoy your day
Date: 12/2/2020 6:45:00 AM
I hope your prayers are answered Rama...
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Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 12/2/2020 7:25:00 AM
Thanks

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