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Letter To a Lost Love

The night was young and full of promise still the music kept beat with my heart the lights in a flash to compete with the mood revealed but a glance of your face I had to approach you though shackled with fear and to my surprise, you approved We exited quietly to walk with the moon in search of an intimate chase A midnight affair that lingered till four with kisses much hotter than sun A love so intense as to shatter the earth and shiver the spine of the bold I held tight my love, I needed much more a lifetime would never fulfill As passion then parted with vows of resolve the hope of reunion was slim I knew I could not hold you, can water hold the sky yet fantasy hijacked my soul A brief romance only was then my reward though one that lives on without end Forever it seems since I tasted of your lips yet even still, I can’t forget that night I’ll not forget the music or the moon or beating hearts when even I but only hear your name I remember everything

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Date: 1/20/2022 3:38:00 AM
Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 1/20/2022 3:50:00 AM
Thank you Beata!!!
Date: 1/19/2022 11:10:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Memories and love go together. A "Wonderful" write. Have a blessed day............................
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Mike Gentile
Date: 1/20/2022 3:52:00 AM
Yes, they surely do! Thanks Paula !!
Date: 1/19/2022 7:05:00 AM
She will live on in fantasy forever Mike. Sweet dreams are made of encounters such as this. I felt the emotions clearly through your well chosen words. Beautiful! Congratulations on a well earned win! Blessings xxoo
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Mike Gentile
Date: 1/20/2022 3:52:00 AM
That's so nice, thanks Connie xxoo
Date: 1/19/2022 7:01:00 AM
"I remember everything" - Beautiful. The title, 'Letter To A Lost Love', is captivating. Congratulations!
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Mike Gentile
Date: 1/20/2022 3:53:00 AM
Thank you very much Christuraj !!!
Date: 1/19/2022 4:00:00 AM
Wonderful write. Congrats and God bless you, Love, Gina
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Mike Gentile
Date: 1/19/2022 4:02:00 AM
I am so happy that you liked it Gina, thank you so much! xxooo
Date: 1/11/2022 6:27:00 PM
Love is a beautiful emotion, it can leave you breathless and in bliss, yet tangled and lost- all at the same time. Your thoughts curl softly around me and my heart. Hugs, Brandy
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Mike Gentile
Date: 1/12/2022 3:51:00 AM
It is amazing what love can do!!! Thank you Brandy xx00
Date: 1/7/2022 11:52:00 AM
How charming and delightfully romantic, Mike. Memories of the night still speak longingly through your poem.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 1/8/2022 4:42:00 AM
Thank you Vijay!!!
Date: 1/7/2022 10:55:00 AM
Hello Mike, I was rooting for the romance to last a life time. Then I felt your pain. Happy Friday. xxx-ooo.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/8/2022 2:52:00 PM
Hello Mike, I hope you are having a nice weekend. You are welcime. xxxx-oooo.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 1/8/2022 4:42:00 AM
Thank you Darlene xxoo
Date: 1/7/2022 10:31:00 AM
I was feeling your pain, Mike. I have a couple of those that were never mailed.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 1/8/2022 4:42:00 AM
Thank you Jenna!!
Date: 1/7/2022 10:13:00 AM
Those romances from our past stay with us forever Mike, I often wonder what became of them, did they marry etc. Enjoy your weekend. Tom
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Mike Gentile
Date: 1/8/2022 4:42:00 AM
Thanks Tom, Happy Saturday!!

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