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If we write together… Then together we can live happily… Ever after.. In our poetry And therefore after.. Rewriting chapters..Replacing pain with laughter. Erasing penciled in memories.. Inking in the permanence of our loves confession.. writing our own history..not a suspense or a mystery.. But love and poetry..Creating our own stanzas.. No flashbacks of previous times and where our hearts have been at. Acknowledging mistakes,but writing them off.. together.. Endulging in metaphors, in lyrical form..lining them carefully between the lines of our poems. In our history book poetry is our rhyme and love is our reason. The past had its season.. For that reason lets start a new ballad..connotations and similies.. sharpening our pencils and inking our pens lets continue to write.. in order to make things right.. Because i cant negate the fact that with you i've experienced love's climax

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Date: 6/10/2013 8:28:00 PM
TIFFANI, a very cool and fascinating first poem on the soup.... This hear my friend is a sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup fan....... God Bless........... Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 6/6/2013 11:52:00 AM
Hi Tiffany, wow.. a nice simple poem. a lovely way to entwine a verse and end it with love's climax. Dropping in with a nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. My name is Linda; I’m here to invite you on over to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* please consider my contest* hopefully you find this place to be the comfort zone your writing pen is looking for. If you ever need or want honest feedback on a certain poem let me know. Stop by anytime you like. I’m looking forward in following you and your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy this community; we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend Linda
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Date: 6/6/2013 10:27:00 AM
A deep, & massive declaration. Excellent!
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Date: 6/5/2013 11:48:00 PM
- A start on forever friendship - Very well written, Tiffani. - Have a nice day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/6/2013 1:24:00 AM
- Welcome to P-Soup-Hope you will get much pleasure from sharing your poems here with us. - Have fun with poetry! - Welcome to read some of my poems. - Have a nice week. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

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