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Magical Melodies

Eternal sunset is running down these knees, Flowing in a song, too seamless to be seen through seas, Let the sand be our witness as we ease , While we move to the waves of the horizon making us freeze, twirling days be the clouds holding the tease , Dahlin’ let the sky pour on so helplessly in keys , To the beat of our samba that once was a memory which please, Can our salsa hips burn through magical Melodies, So Have you forgotten us with every breeze, Which kept our sparks alive as our hearts seize!

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Tonye George

Date: 4/2/2024 5:33:00 PM

Nice rhymes. "Can our salsa hips burn through magical Melodies." It definitely should. Nice piece Aura.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/29/2024 10:57:00 AM

Love how you used references to dance and music mixed in with romance and nature. Lovely poem.

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 3/29/2024 5:02:00 AM

Dear Aura, I danced with the rhythm of longing and nostalgia. Your words eloquently create an eternal sunset and twirling days, where memories intertwine with the beat of a samba. I loved your imagery of sand witnessing our ease and the sky pouring helplessly in keys creates a vivid emotional landscape. It's a plea to reignite a flame that once burned brightly the magic in shared moments and the yearning for their return. Love it! - Blessings, Daniel

Silent One

Date: 3/28/2024 3:45:00 PM

So nice to see you posting..Great rhymes

Tom Woody

Date: 3/28/2024 2:57:00 PM

I hope those salsa hips can overcome the problem of the eternal sunset in them thar knees. Cute poem aura

Ink Empress

Date: 3/28/2024 11:46:00 AM

You really do rhyme so well dahlin! I love this monorhyme, and the flow of musically pleasing lines so well articulated in a very captivating cadence! I especially love the lines “ Dahlin’ let the sky pour on so helplessly in keys , To the beat of our samba that once was a memory which please, Can our salsa hips burn through magical Melodies, “ how gorgeous and heartfelt , soulfully divine write! Fave it is for me! Best wishes for the contest