The Aura Rhymes Poet Monorhyme

Magical Melodies

Eternal sunset is running down these knees, 
Flowing in a song, too seamless to be seen through seas, 
Let the sand be our witness as we ease , 
While we move to the waves of the horizon making us freeze, 
twirling days be the clouds holding the tease , 
Dahlin’ let the sky pour on so helplessly in keys , 
To the beat of our samba that once was a memory which please, 
Can our salsa hips burn through magical Melodies, 
So Have you forgotten us with every breeze, 
Which kept our sparks alive as our hearts seize!

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nastyolives blegh September 22, 2024 at 1:20 PM Pleasure reading

I Am Anaya August 15, 2024 at 3:06 PM I resonated with the salsa hips, I have zumba'd for 15 years! I enjoyed your style and monorhyme, don't let him forget the aurora rhymes you ink! I Am Anaya

Mystic Rose Rose August 3, 2024 at 3:28 PM can you please post the firefly song for me, I'd love to hear you sing it

Abdullah Alhemaidy August 3, 2024 at 7:47 AM So nice indeed! Have a wonderful time :-) Thanks for sharing this beautiful poem!

Andrea Dietrich June 22, 2024 at 9:46 AM Nice rhyming. I love poetry about sunsets.

Mrs. Yolanda Nicholsen June 19, 2024 at 2:50 AM This is an awesome read many blessings

Aurore Severo May 14, 2024 at 1:34 AM Beautiful poetry, in a world of conflict this poetry soothes my heart. xoxo

Tonye George April 2, 2024 at 5:33 PM Nice rhymes. "Can our salsa hips burn through magical Melodies." It definitely should. Nice piece Aura.

Andrea Dietrich March 29, 2024 at 10:57 AM Love how you used references to dance and music mixed in with romance and nature. Lovely poem.

Daniel Henry Rodgers March 29, 2024 at 5:02 AM Dear Aura, I danced with the rhythm of longing and nostalgia. Your words eloquently create an eternal sunset and twirling days, where memories intertwine with the beat of a samba. I loved your imagery of sand witnessing our ease and the sky pouring helplessly in keys creates a vivid emotional landscape. It's a plea to reignite a flame that once burned brightly the magic in shared moments and the yearning for their return. Love it! - Blessings, Daniel

Silent One March 28, 2024 at 3:45 PM So nice to see you posting..Great rhymes

Ink Empress March 28, 2024 at 11:46 AM You really do rhyme so well dahlin! I love this monorhyme, and the flow of musically pleasing lines so well articulated in a very captivating cadence! I especially love the lines “ Dahlin’ let the sky pour on so helplessly in keys , To the beat of our samba that once was a memory which please, Can our salsa hips burn through magical Melodies, “ how gorgeous and heartfelt , soulfully divine write! Fave it is for me! Best wishes for the contest