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Magical Melodies

Eternal sunset is running down these knees, 
Flowing in a song, too seamless to be seen through seas, 
Let the sand be our witness as we ease , 
While we move to the waves of the horizon making us freeze, 
twirling days be the clouds holding the tease , 
Dahlin’ let the sky pour on so helplessly in keys , 
To the beat of our samba that once was a memory which please, 
Can our salsa hips burn through magical Melodies, 
So Have you forgotten us with every breeze, 
Which kept our sparks alive as our hearts seize!

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Peonieslore xo Date: 9/22/2024 1:20:00 PM Pleasure reading Login to Reply

I Am Anaya Date: 8/15/2024 3:06:00 PM I resonated with the salsa hips, I have zumba'd for 15 years! I enjoyed your style and monorhyme, don't let him forget the aurora rhymes you ink! I Am Anaya Login to Reply

Mystic Rose Rose Date: 8/3/2024 3:28:00 PM can you please post the firefly song for me, I'd love to hear you sing it Login to Reply

Abdullah Alhemaidy Date: 8/3/2024 7:47:00 AM So nice indeed! Have a wonderful time :-) Thanks for sharing this beautiful poem! Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 6/22/2024 9:46:00 AM Nice rhyming. I love poetry about sunsets. Login to Reply

Yolanda Nicholsen Date: 6/19/2024 2:50:00 AM This is an awesome read many blessings Login to Reply

Aurore Severo Date: 5/14/2024 1:34:00 AM Beautiful poetry, in a world of conflict this poetry soothes my heart. xoxo Login to Reply

Tonye George Date: 4/2/2024 5:33:00 PM Nice rhymes. "Can our salsa hips burn through magical Melodies." It definitely should. Nice piece Aura. Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 3/29/2024 10:57:00 AM Love how you used references to dance and music mixed in with romance and nature. Lovely poem. Login to Reply

Daniel Henry Rodgers Date: 3/29/2024 5:02:00 AM Dear Aura, I danced with the rhythm of longing and nostalgia. Your words eloquently create an eternal sunset and twirling days, where memories intertwine with the beat of a samba. I loved your imagery of sand witnessing our ease and the sky pouring helplessly in keys creates a vivid emotional landscape. It's a plea to reignite a flame that once burned brightly the magic in shared moments and the yearning for their return. Love it! - Blessings, Daniel Login to Reply

Silent One Date: 3/28/2024 3:45:00 PM So nice to see you posting..Great rhymes Login to Reply

Tom Woody Date: 3/28/2024 2:57:00 PM I hope those salsa hips can overcome the problem of the eternal sunset in them thar knees. Cute poem aura Login to Reply

Ink Empress Date: 3/28/2024 11:46:00 AM You really do rhyme so well dahlin! I love this monorhyme, and the flow of musically pleasing lines so well articulated in a very captivating cadence! I especially love the lines “ Dahlin’ let the sky pour on so helplessly in keys , To the beat of our samba that once was a memory which please, Can our salsa hips burn through magical Melodies, “ how gorgeous and heartfelt , soulfully divine write! Fave it is for me! Best wishes for the contest Login to Reply