Lethal Love

Love
burning
third degree
lethal weapon
stay away from me
it will draw you closer
a moth towards a candle
all other paths lost except this
gradual surrender to my flame
a flame that will make you pure before death.







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By:kashinath karmakar

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Carol Sunshine Brown

November 30, 2011 at 1:02 PM

Thank you for your kind comments on my writing. They are very much appreciated Kash. Love, Carol

Poet Destroyer A

October 21, 2011 at 9:45 AM

,Good morning,~Kash ~ how are you this wonderful Friday :-) morning... As for me, I'm missing everyone I know here on the soup PLUS more. *glad we are back up*. By the way I'm also stopping by to read a couple of poems OR commenting the ones I could not all week or yesterday, after being shut out for them awful few days..ENJOYED YOUR POEM, thank you for sharing! Take care and have yourself a wonderful Friday~ ;-) Always,..p.d.

Gwendolen Song

October 15, 2011 at 1:56 PM

I write something about this poem on 50% of my writes....u should try it too! It's like a Cracker Jack surprise!

Gwendolen Song

October 15, 2011 at 1:54 PM

YOu have penned the fear of falling in love...u warned her..she will be burnt like a moth in your flame!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

October 13, 2011 at 11:31 AM

every time I read your lines Kash it gets better and better and better .. thoughts so potent and powerful.. this is magnetic and mesmerizing .. good luck if for any contest my friend...

Elizabeth Wesley

October 12, 2011 at 6:39 PM

Oh the chill in the last line. Love the "third degree" too. A very strong verse with a great "push pull" feel to it.

Nette Onclaud

October 12, 2011 at 6:15 PM

greeat, kash... wanna know if love is leathal weapon.. yes, it is!! :) huggs!

Andrea Dietrich

October 12, 2011 at 3:59 PM

Kash in answer to your question about this one, I think it depends on what you mean. If this is exactly what you mean, then keep the word!!

Margaret Foster

October 12, 2011 at 12:24 AM

Hot stuff...you have a way with words...Margaret

Cyndi Macmillan

October 11, 2011 at 11:55 PM

Nice one, Kash. I really liked the line: all other paths lost... Stopping by also to thank you for catching my mistakes in the dizain! Thank you! I edited. You're a chum. :-) Cyndi

Andrea Dietrich

October 11, 2011 at 10:54 PM

ooooh, very interesting. "make you pure before death." That is a really different way to think of it, Kash. Is this for The ten line contest, my friend?