Lethal Love

Love burning third degree lethal weapon stay away from me it will draw you closer a moth towards a candle all other paths lost except this gradual surrender to my flame a flame that will make you pure before death. ================================= By:kashinath karmakar

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/30/2011 1:02:00 PM

Thank you for your kind comments on my writing. They are very much appreciated Kash. Love, Carol

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/21/2011 9:45:00 AM

,Good morning,~Kash ~ how are you this wonderful Friday :-) morning... As for me, I'm missing everyone I know here on the soup PLUS more. *glad we are back up*. By the way I'm also stopping by to read a couple of poems OR commenting the ones I could not all week or yesterday, after being shut out for them awful few days..ENJOYED YOUR POEM, thank you for sharing! Take care and have yourself a wonderful Friday~ ;-) Always,..p.d.

Gwendolen Song

Date: 10/15/2011 1:56:00 PM

I write something about this poem on 50% of my writes....u should try it too! It's like a Cracker Jack surprise!

Gwendolen Song

Date: 10/15/2011 1:54:00 PM

YOu have penned the fear of falling in love...u warned her..she will be burnt like a moth in your flame!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/13/2011 11:31:00 AM

every time I read your lines Kash it gets better and better and better .. thoughts so potent and powerful.. this is magnetic and mesmerizing .. good luck if for any contest my friend...

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 10/12/2011 6:39:00 PM

Oh the chill in the last line. Love the "third degree" too. A very strong verse with a great "push pull" feel to it.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 10/12/2011 6:15:00 PM

greeat, kash... wanna know if love is leathal weapon.. yes, it is!! :) huggs!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/12/2011 3:59:00 PM

Kash in answer to your question about this one, I think it depends on what you mean. If this is exactly what you mean, then keep the word!!

Margaret Foster

Date: 10/12/2011 12:24:00 AM

Hot stuff...you have a way with words...Margaret

Cyndi Macmillan

Date: 10/11/2011 11:55:00 PM

Nice one, Kash. I really liked the line: all other paths lost... Stopping by also to thank you for catching my mistakes in the dizain! Thank you! I edited. You're a chum. :-) Cyndi

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/11/2011 10:54:00 PM

ooooh, very interesting. "make you pure before death." That is a really different way to think of it, Kash. Is this for The ten line contest, my friend?

S.Jagathsimhan Nair

Date: 10/11/2011 8:15:00 PM

deep and intense..nice write.

Daver Austin

Date: 10/11/2011 4:26:00 PM

Wow! This is one affair you don't want to get burned in. Enjoyed. daver

Kash Poet

Date: 10/11/2011 2:54:00 PM

Stay away from me!!