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My foolish heart realizing its faults, is now quite sorry Making up our differences is just a taste of honey If ever I would leave you would sure be another story The nearness of you, so sweet, so loving, life could be sunny. Making up our differences is just a taste of honey You came a long way from St. Louis so we’ll be together The nearness of you, so sweet, so loving, life could be sunny. My prayer is an entreaty that all troubles we'll weather You came a long way from St. Louis so we be together, For my darling I can't stop loving you, but know that someday My prayer is an entreaty that all troubles we'll weather It's just a matter of time and things will go our better way. For my darling I can't stop loving you but know that someday We will remember funny familiar forgotten feelings It's just a matter of time and things will go our better way. The green green grass of home will bring to us our joy of healings. We will remember funny familiar forgotten feelings If you need me and not some other guy who adores you not The green green grass of home will bring to us our joy of healings. I promise I'll never be untrue, a vow is not forgot. Fly me to the moon, our dance of love happy our life will be If ever I would leave you would sure be another story Forget the past, the bright future beckons, love's been good to me My foolish heart realizing its faults, is now quite sorry.

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Date: 3/22/2022 6:43:00 AM
I really like this charming piece written in the Pantoum style. Victor, there is a poignant undercurrent of sorrow in your beautiful poem.
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Date: 3/13/2022 3:04:00 PM
love the way you cleverly wove song titles into your poem pantoums are challenging at the best of times, well penned Victor:-) hugs Jan xx (hubby has covid I am hoping its a mild case) xx
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Date: 3/13/2022 1:42:00 AM
The songs within sing your praises of love Victor. Beautiful! Blessings xxoo
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Date: 3/11/2022 5:33:00 PM
The green green grass of home indicative of a strong longing for a long ago feeling. Victor, I also love: We will remember funny familiar forgotten feelings. Enjoyed.God bless you, my friend!
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Date: 3/11/2022 9:20:00 AM
Nice poem, Victor. So emotional.
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Date: 3/11/2022 7:37:00 AM
Love this romantic write, and in a Pantoum form... I haven't written a Pantoum in a long time.. need to do so. Blessings my friend.
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Date: 3/11/2022 5:31:00 AM
Touching and romantic with a hint of sadness, Victor:)
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Date: 3/11/2022 4:03:00 AM
Hi Victor, you have a subtle tribute here to songs we are familiar with. Enjoyable read..Delice
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Date: 3/10/2022 11:07:00 PM
A Pantoum is a difficult form of verse and you have created it with remarkable elan ! As ever, your romantic heart flames with passion in this write too, dear Victor !
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Date: 3/10/2022 11:23:00 AM
This pantoum is so romantically lovely, it could be a song itself, Victor. Nice work! :)
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Date: 3/10/2022 9:23:00 AM
I loved how you worked song titles and lyrics throughout your poem, Victor. Well done!
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Date: 3/10/2022 9:01:00 AM
Sometimes the path to true love isn't as smooth as you'd wish. Tom
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