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A Withering The truth had blossomed where now it whithers on the foundation of lies, no footing to uphold nor its roots to build a future. 2020 February 19 *2nd Place* Let the Pens Flow - Tanka ~~Jenish Somadas Howmanysyllables; 5, 7, 5, 7, 7.

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Date: 2/28/2020 5:25:00 PM
An evocative write, the roots of truth need a foundation of honor, congratulations on your win, William-
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Date: 2/28/2020 6:03:00 PM
I a refreshing welcome and thoughtful share, Michelle, -- Aloha!~@wk
Date: 2/25/2020 9:54:00 PM
Congratulations!
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Date: 2/25/2020 10:05:00 PM
Thanks, Eve -- Aloha!~@wk
Date: 2/25/2020 12:42:00 PM
- No one can build a future on lies ... excellent written, William - Congratulations - // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/25/2020 12:46:00 PM
Much thanks and thence some, Anne-Lise -- Aloha!~@wk
Date: 2/25/2020 9:51:00 AM
In foundation of lies the truth will wither out.. Deep poem.. Great win William..
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Date: 2/25/2020 10:04:00 AM
Thanks, Jenish -- Aloha!~@wk
Date: 2/19/2020 9:31:00 PM
Great work! The foundation must be honest!
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Date: 2/19/2020 10:36:00 PM
Ditto sweet Kim -- Aloha!~@wk

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