Let the Day In

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The pale speckled gates had been shut. We're saying our final goodbyes to the city. Dawn is breaking through the fortified walls. The calming silver haze of dawn, A sparkling, gleaming beacon of joy, It's a new day, a fresh beginning. I scribbled every morning.

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Delice Arleen Skelly

Date: 9/19/2021 10:25:00 AM

New day and fresh beginnings..Lovely...Delice

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/19/2021 5:26:00 AM

A beautiful day dawning through your words, Lasaad.

Sotto Poet
Date: 9/19/2021 7:59:00 AM

Thanks Vijay appreciate your kind words

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 9/19/2021 2:43:00 AM

You're lucky. It takes me ages to wake up.

Sotto Poet
Date: 9/19/2021 7:58:00 AM

Thank you so much, Victor, it takes me along time to wake up as well my friend

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 9/18/2021 5:48:00 PM

Favorite line: Dawn is breaking through the fortified walls.

Sotto Poet
Date: 9/18/2021 6:15:00 PM

Thanks, Kim, I appreciate your kindness

Alexis Y.

Date: 9/18/2021 5:11:00 PM

Wow! Lasaad, I loved the message in your well-written write. "A fresh beginning and new day" Beautiful photo, good content, and imagery. Well done:-) Alexis

Sotto Poet
Date: 9/18/2021 6:16:00 PM

Thanks, Dear Alexis, for your delightful comment.