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Here you are before me, broken Heartbreak in your eyes, unspoken I see the emotional scars in eyes that were once filled with stars Who hurt you? Your face doesn't lie Confide in me...feel free to cry Let those tears fall...they'll leave no stain Let me fix you...and ease your pain! Submitted for... Strand Choice 2, Any Form, Any Theme Poetry Contest (Winner: 3rd Place) Sponsored by Brian Strand Date: 01/19/2020 LAY It On Me - 8×8 Poetry Contest (Winner: 1st Place) Sponsored by charles messina Date written and submitted: 01/08/2020

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Date: 1/16/2020 10:05:00 PM
Beautiful verse, Edward, congratulations your win. Eve
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 1/16/2020 11:26:00 PM
Thank you, Eve:-) Glad you liked it!
Date: 1/16/2020 5:25:00 PM
I really, really love this beautiful poem Edward. I am putting it into my faves! Congratulations on your very deserving first placement! xxoo
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 1/16/2020 5:46:00 PM
Thank you so much, Connie:-) I appreciate the comments, congrats, and the fav!
Date: 1/16/2020 10:30:00 AM
An uplifting ending Edward, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 1/16/2020 11:30:00 AM
Thank you, Jan:-)
Date: 1/16/2020 7:07:00 AM
Such a beautiful poem, Edward. Well done my friend. Congratulations on your win. Blessings ~Charlie
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 1/16/2020 11:29:00 AM
I greatly appreciate my placement, Charlie!:-) Many thanks!
Date: 1/8/2020 8:47:00 PM
all it takes is one caring person to fix a broken soul... nicely crafted Edward... best wishes in the contest... hugs :)
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 1/8/2020 9:35:00 PM
Thank you, Sandra:-) Very true indeed!

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