Edward Ibeh Poet Lay

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Let Me Fix You

Here you are before me, broken
Heartbreak in your eyes, unspoken
I see the emotional scars
in eyes that were once filled with stars
Who hurt you? Your face doesn't lie
Confide in me...feel free to cry
Let those tears fall...they'll leave no stain
Let me fix you...and ease your pain!



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Strand Choice 2, Any Form, Any Theme Poetry Contest (Winner: 3rd Place)
Sponsored by Brian Strand
Date: 01/19/2020

LAY It On Me - 8×8 Poetry Contest (Winner: 1st Place)
Sponsored by charles messina
Date written and submitted: 01/08/2020

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Eve Roper January 16, 2020 at 10:05 PM Beautiful verse, Edward, congratulations your win. Eve Edward Ibeh January 16, 2020 at 11:26 PM Thank you, Eve:-) Glad you liked it!

Connie Marcum Wong January 16, 2020 at 5:25 PM I really, really love this beautiful poem Edward. I am putting it into my faves! Congratulations on your very deserving first placement! xxoo Edward Ibeh January 16, 2020 at 5:46 PM Thank you so much, Connie:-) I appreciate the comments, congrats, and the fav!

Jan Allison January 16, 2020 at 10:30 AM An uplifting ending Edward, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx Edward Ibeh January 16, 2020 at 11:30 AM Thank you, Jan:-)

Charles Messina January 16, 2020 at 7:07 AM Such a beautiful poem, Edward. Well done my friend. Congratulations on your win. Blessings ~Charlie Edward Ibeh January 16, 2020 at 11:29 AM I greatly appreciate my placement, Charlie!:-) Many thanks!

Sandra Adams January 8, 2020 at 8:47 PM all it takes is one caring person to fix a broken soul... nicely crafted Edward... best wishes in the contest... hugs :) Edward Ibeh January 8, 2020 at 9:35 PM Thank you, Sandra:-) Very true indeed!