Kash Poet Poet Tanka

Let Love Triumph

Human imprudence
leading to so much bloodshed
learn to love like birds
share the sky above to fly
let love triumph over bullets.




© kashinath karmakar( 10th August 2011)
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Placement: 10th ;(August 2011)

Contest:Bald Eagle in Cemetery contest (Photo based)

Sponsor:Carolyn Devonshire

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Andrea Dietrich July 20, 2013 at 1:56 PM remembering this nice tanka of yours, Kash. You are one poet whose every poem I can say that I have seen!! Hope you are doing well this weekend. Miss our chatty soupmails!

Gwendolen Song October 8, 2011 at 8:29 AM It seems like forever ago that I read this....such a great contest of Carolyn's....You wrote such a strong message in this poem...Love conquers all, Kash. That's what my Jesus says in the Bible. Bullets are equivalent to hatred and therefore they will lose out in the end. :) G.

Steven Mossburg August 13, 2011 at 6:37 PM Congratulations on your tenth place win. You capture the problem in a nutshell "love over bullets". If it could only be.

Zzzzz Zzzzz August 13, 2011 at 10:55 AM One day these wishes might just come true. Congratulations on your well merited contest placing. xoxo Robert.

Dr.Ram Mehta August 13, 2011 at 8:15 AM Yes, you can write more than one but with the continuity of the theme, kashinath

Elaine George August 13, 2011 at 7:42 AM Powerful and wise message conveyed in this Great Tanks, Kash.Many congrats on your SUPER WIN. Lainie

Andrea Dietrich August 12, 2011 at 11:17 PM Just stopping by to say hi, Kash. Comments done, now just maybe see some contest winners or call it a night! I need to write for some contests too. Luv, Andrea

Linda-Marie Sweetheart August 12, 2011 at 5:35 PM throughout history this would be an excellent mantra Kash for everyone to read.. luv is the only victory we all can share and enjoy .. great one my friend...

James Fraser August 12, 2011 at 12:40 PM Maybe one day love will triumph over bullets Kashinath. Many congratulations on your win in Carolyn's contest :)

Nette Onclaud August 12, 2011 at 4:50 AM oh yeah!! so cool with sweet congrats to you, kashi... any thing new? come visit! :) huggs!

Andrea Dietrich August 11, 2011 at 10:58 PM I love how you did this. Was it in the eagle contest. I take it you won. Congratulations. I'd soupmail you something but last time I tried going there, it caused me a big headache. I'll comment somewhere else to you.

Wilma Neels August 11, 2011 at 4:07 PM So cool to see this one on the winner's list Kash ;) congratulations to you :)

David Williams August 11, 2011 at 2:05 PM hey Kashinath, congrats on your win, David

Jack Horne August 11, 2011 at 1:34 PM Many conrats to you, Kash : )

Nette Onclaud August 11, 2011 at 12:56 PM yoohoo... best cheers, kashi!! come on over..:) huggs, nette

Joyce Johnson August 11, 2011 at 12:36 PM Congratulations Kashinath. Very worthy win. Love, Joyce

Dr.Ram Mehta August 11, 2011 at 9:29 AM Congratulations on the win in the contest of carolyn,kashinath

John Freeman August 11, 2011 at 8:01 AM Kashinath, a worthy poem for Carolyn's contest. Agape, Moses

Carol Sunshine Brown August 11, 2011 at 7:25 AM Congratulations on your well deserved win in Carolyn's contest Kashinath. Love,Carol

Afroze Ali August 10, 2011 at 9:57 PM Beautifully written, i was thinking on the same lines but couldn't find the words. you have done a good job.

Carrie Richards August 10, 2011 at 9:05 PM The last line sums up the inspiration so perfectly! YES!

Chiquitachiamaka Baity August 10, 2011 at 8:51 PM Congrats on your win with this beautiful poem....Well deserved!!!!!!

Michael J. Falotico August 10, 2011 at 5:05 PM Congrat for the win and for the excellent piece my friend.... well done... Michael

Linda-Marie Sweetheart August 10, 2011 at 4:05 PM Congrats Kash on a super win in the contest with these fantastic lines so poignant on the eagle luv..

Carolyn Devonshire August 10, 2011 at 3:59 PM I hope one day mankind does learn to "let love triumph over bullets," Kash. Very nice poem. Congratulations on your win in the Bald Eagle in the Cemetery contest! I judged blindly and there were many great entries, so you should feel proud. Love, Carolyn

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