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Let Her In

All the signs point in one direction but I don't seem to be going that way trouble breathing   trouble being and seeing through all the foggy moments blown my way   The warm shoulder on a cold night while I'm freezing inside wayward thoughts running   through a maze lost in a haze of misdirection and misunderstandings   Living in a mirror of discontent hell bent on destruction and interruption of every step ever taken   was it all mistaken   A dream of unreality simplicity and longing to be more than a smile passing by collecting the memoirs in my heart but never   letting them back out amongst the stars   to breathe   There's no more room to breathe there's just no more room to be   a soft whisper speaks into the darkness I let her in

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 3/18/2018 2:04:00 PM
Oh I like this very much Timmy! Ending is so charming.. Beautiuful, my romantic friend :)
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Date: 3/6/2018 9:29:00 AM
The ending was perfect for this beautiful poem Tim.
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Date: 3/2/2018 10:31:00 AM
A lot to identify with this and a very nice ending Tim. Well done :)
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Date: 3/1/2018 9:32:00 PM
such an elusive write here Tim, beautiful
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