Richard Lamoureux Poet Etheree

Lessons Learnt In Life

She
Taught me
To love her
So completely
Inch by precious inch
Me   a   willing    student
Not  once    was  I  discouraged
She helped me practice night and day
With her there were no  l i m i t a t i o n s
I was given the    f r e e d o m   to express
In time she became a  w i l l i ng  student
She  could  no  longer  resist  my  touch
Her an~~~instrument~~~of pleasure
Sweet notes escaped as she moaned
Time      no  longer     mattered
R e s i s t a n c e     futile
Symphonic--------Joy 
Floating. ~~~~ up
F r o m  her
Thighs

For Silent One's contest
"You don't learn anything about life in school"
Sometime "HARD" lessons are the best.

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Constance La France October 6, 2015 at 12:24 PM Richard, oh so sensual and sexy, wonderfully penned, I like it, 7 and thanks for visiting my poem, Dad's Workshop ... Richard Lamoureux October 10, 2015 at 9:23 AM Thanks Constance.

Andrea Dietrich October 5, 2015 at 3:42 PM oh my, you naughty boy with your last note!!! what a GREAT way to do this contest theme. You chose MY theme but took it to a completely different place. NOPE, not something you learn in high school (unless you are one of the "fast girls" hahaha) Richard Lamoureux October 6, 2015 at 8:21 AM Ha ha, I didn't know any of the fast girls in highschool and if I did I was probably to slow to catch them.

Eileen Manassian October 5, 2015 at 3:00 PM The harder the lesson.....the greater the absorbtion of the lesson.. ;)......oh for such a teacher. Deliriously beautiful.....my money is on you.... Richard Lamoureux October 6, 2015 at 8:27 AM ;0) i did have a bit of fun with this little poem. It's been crazy here, my business partner has been sick so I am working crazy hours. Also I have to bring my iPad in because it is not displaying any new emails since the end of sept, grrrrr!

Mama Bear October 5, 2015 at 11:40 AM come to think of it maybe I should take lessons from you Love mom

Mama Bear October 5, 2015 at 11:39 AM Certainly nothing your old mama taught you LOL Best wishes in the contest you sensual guy you. Loads of love Mom Richard Lamoureux October 6, 2015 at 8:28 AM Thanks mom I love you too!

Paul Callus October 5, 2015 at 11:18 AM In time even the student becomes a teacher to the teacher! Experience counts. Very sensual and sensuous. // paul Richard Lamoureux October 6, 2015 at 8:30 AM Thanks Paul, we should never stop learning, it keeps life interesting.

Ravindra K Kapoor October 5, 2015 at 9:56 AM Its different dear friend quite different. Quite a hot and sensuous write. From than angle you have brilliantly painted what you wanted to sketch. Sneh (a Hindi word substituting Love as it can be used for anyone and all) best wishes always...Ravindra K Kapoor Richard Lamoureux October 6, 2015 at 8:31 AM Best wish s to you as well, thanks for the visit.

Sara Kendrick October 5, 2015 at 8:43 AM Reads like a winner..Way to go..Thanks for the visit to my page..I appreciate the time spent there reading and commenting..Sara Richard Lamoureux October 6, 2015 at 8:19 AM Thanks Sara.

Robert Lindley October 4, 2015 at 8:41 PM Sensuality burning hot and creativity is off the charts with this write my friend. I have not a clue about this poetry form but see the brilliance in your poem in its depth, sexual message and hidden desires brought forward. Hell with it--- giving this a ten, as a 7 will not do! Richard Lamoureux October 5, 2015 at 7:46 AM Thanks Robert you are kind.

Michael Tor October 4, 2015 at 6:57 PM Richard sensual and provocative! The hard lessons are the best lol. One of the best entries I have read so far. I wish you great luck in the contest. This form is very difficult to write in. You have perfected it in this write. Richard Lamoureux October 4, 2015 at 7:04 PM I hope Silent is on a similar wavelength as you Michael. Thanks for commenting and the kind visits. Richard Lamoureux October 4, 2015 at 7:01 PM Hi Nejeri, your comment brings me a smile, I was writing of a young man learning the lessons of love from a more experienced lover. I went back and read from your perspective and I see how this can be interpreted differently.

Njeri Hunjeri October 4, 2015 at 6:13 PM Hi Richard. I like the style you have written this poem in, especially because you are talking about your mum and the life lessons she has taught you. Very beautifully written. All the best in the contest. Richard Lamoureux October 4, 2015 at 7:02 PM Oops my response jumped up to Michael.

Alexis Y. October 4, 2015 at 10:25 AM Richard, I really enjoyed your take on theme. So beautiful and romantic. This sensual write should place well. Good luck in the contest:-) Alexis7 Richard Lamoureux October 4, 2015 at 7:05 PM Thanks Alexis, the visit and 7 are much appreciated. Hugs Rick.

Tim Smith October 4, 2015 at 10:22 AM Very sensual Richard. HARD lessons are the best.... Nice Richard Lamoureux October 4, 2015 at 7:06 PM Ha ha, I'm sure you can relate!

Charmaine Chircop October 4, 2015 at 10:14 AM Hot and Sensual, sizzle sizzle : ) Richard Lamoureux October 4, 2015 at 10:20 AM Thanks Charmaine, I am being a bit naughty!