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Lesson of Pain

While I sat beside my window Clinking my pen on the pages of notebook Deep in thoughts I ws, A cold stroke of wind shook The silence was broken A few drops of rain poured in, I took a glimpse outside Some drops falling down, filled with passion To reach its designation But it had to face hurdles Clumpsy trees held them half a way The leafs ,branches shattered The dream of reach then it rained more Sky cried more at its destiny Eyes tured itself sour In some while the sun peeped into the earth Those drops sparkled In the sunshine , happier then ever Slowly colour of the sky fainted It was evening I gathered my feelings back Pages of the book were wet I never knew, from tears or it was the rain All my thoughts came to an end , And I was taught ,A lesson from the pain

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Date: 2/21/2016 11:53:00 AM
radhika keshri, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 6/24/2015 1:18:00 AM
Radhika, this is a sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 6/22/2015 3:36:00 PM
Radhika, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 6/21/2015 1:22:00 PM
- Welcome to P Soup, Radhika ! - A poem that warms your heart or relieve your pain ... share your own poems here with us - Write poems and send it out into the world, I look forward to your next poem :) - // Anne-Lise :)
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