Leopard

Motionless the big cat waits
deep in the scrub shadows
sun starting to set, night draws in
fading light makes her invisible

Only the odd flick of an ear
gives her positition away
suddenly she tenses and coils
a spurt of speed and its done

She and her cubs will eat tonight
softly the mother leopard calls
with a few rustles of undergrowth
they tumble into the moonlight

Furry balls of fun without a care
they belly up to the deer carcass
a few more weeks learning the ropes
then a solitary life awaits them all 

Of the four she now has with her
maybe one will make it through
struggling with the strife of living 
whilst fighting to rear her own cubs

For now they are safe and well tended
with a soft cry she takes them back
to her well hidden clifftop cave
they are all safe for yet another day

written 08/06/2013
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013


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Date: 3/16/2014 10:29:00 AM
Shadow What a sweet write. The story you told is very captivating and creative. It keeps the reader amused and entertained. Thanks for the great comment on my What Am I poem.
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Date: 3/16/2014 4:58:00 PM
ty Robin hugs
Date: 8/8/2013 9:03:00 AM
Aren't Robert's comments funny? Seriously I love your descriptive scenes. "Odd flick of an ear" - favorite phrase. Thank you Shadow. love, Kathy
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Date: 8/8/2013 9:26:00 AM
Tnx Kathy yes he is lol. (ripple of the shoulder) or (back) flick of the tail and on Shadow x smiles
Date: 8/6/2013 12:01:00 PM
When they get home they realize the cable's out again. What will we do all night long Mom in our little den. Go get the cards and pop some corn. We'll make it through somehow. :) Afterall, what would you do if you were born a cow? Oh, for silly. :)
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Date: 8/7/2013 5:58:00 AM
love the humor of your remarks ty Shadow x smiles
Date: 8/5/2013 9:27:00 PM
Vividly detailed. A well-written documentary about survival in the wild. Milt
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Date: 8/7/2013 5:59:00 AM
hi Milt I am so happy you enjoyed it Shadow x smiles
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