Leopard

leopard spots its prey while stalking it stealthily~ birds sound the alarm 4-14-2022 Wild Animal Haiku Poetry Contest Sponsor: Tania Kitchin Used PS syllable Counter

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Phyllis Babcock

Date: 6/2/2022 4:10:00 PM

A wonderful haiku Joseph. You can visualize this scene. love phyl

Valsa George

Date: 6/1/2022 9:23:00 PM

The weaker is saved from the claws of the stronger with the help of others. Here the birds come to the rescue of the weaker.... a wonderful gesture ! Beautiful haiku, Joseph

Alexis Y.

Date: 5/21/2022 7:45:00 PM

Hi Joseph, I’m just coming back to say congratulations on a well deserved win. Have a nice evening and weekend;-) Alexis

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 5/2/2022 10:26:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Joseph. Sometimes I think animals try to help each other out by crying out a warning. Many times animals have shown compassion for injured animals not of their species. A great haiku. Blessings xxoo

Anna Marie Kaianah

Date: 4/30/2022 4:15:00 PM

I love this. Leopards are one of my favorite animals. Wonderful write Joseph. ~Anna Kaianah

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 4/25/2022 1:47:00 PM

Wonderful Haiku Joseph, lucky was the leopards prey. Some years back a Ranger was taken out on a night drive, his clothing was found two days later. Beautiful animals fierce and fast. Congratulations my friend on your win in Tania's contest. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Harry Horsman

Date: 4/24/2022 2:35:00 AM

Those birdie spoil-sports. LOve this Joseph, and its play on words, first line.

Joe Maverick

Date: 4/22/2022 10:52:00 PM

Do i spot a winner here Joseph.? Stealthy stalking among the flora Watching birds aware The feline fowl deeds does dare '

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 4/20/2022 4:20:00 PM

There is a lot of action going on in this awesome haiku. I love the way the alarm was sounded by the birds. Congratulations on your win, Evelyn

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 4/20/2022 10:49:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. Your "leopard" is a wonderful write. Have a blessed day writing away.......................

Judy Ball

Date: 4/19/2022 9:20:00 PM

Congrats on a well deserved win Joseph. Good Stuff. God Bless, JB

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/19/2022 2:45:00 PM

Hi, Joseph. sorry I can't see your poems more often. Just found a bit of time for this haiku winner list. Congrats to you. I notices you used "spots" in your first line and my mind went right to the spots this animal has.

Christuraj Alex

Date: 4/18/2022 8:51:00 PM

Dangerous one, indeed! Beautifully written. Congratulations!

Tania Kitchin

Date: 4/18/2022 8:41:00 AM

Joe, congratulations on your winning placement with your wonderful haiku, love the last line!

Joseph May
Date: 4/18/2022 5:27:00 PM

Thank you for my placement Tania

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/17/2022 1:56:00 PM

I hope the birds give the warning and save the prey. I enjoyed reading your contest entry. Way to go. Reads like a good contender to me. Sara

Brandy Nicole

Date: 4/15/2022 7:31:00 PM

This prey, that the leopard is after, better heed those "birds" as they . . . "sound the alarm" You paint the scene so beautifully with your words. :) Brandy

Anselmo Boles

Date: 4/14/2022 6:23:00 PM

J.M, I think what you're saying is that; "Not every strategy can breed success". Better luck next time, leopard! Good one!...ab

Joseph May
Date: 4/15/2022 6:57:00 PM

Thank you AB

Vijay Pandit

Date: 4/14/2022 1:41:00 PM

I have heard that alarm many times. Great images invoked, Joseph.

Joseph May
Date: 4/15/2022 6:56:00 PM

Thank you Vijay

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 4/14/2022 1:09:00 PM

Lovely haiku, Joseph.

Joseph May
Date: 4/15/2022 6:56:00 PM

Thank you Victor

Heidi Sands

Date: 4/14/2022 11:48:00 AM

Great one Joseph. I love the 1st line..*spots :)

Joseph May
Date: 4/14/2022 11:51:00 AM

Thank you Heidi, Glad you liked it :>)

Eve Roper

Date: 4/14/2022 11:39:00 AM

Great informative verse, Joseph, good luck in the contest. Blessings and Happy Easter

Joseph May
Date: 4/14/2022 11:50:00 AM

Thank you Eve, Happy Easter, Blessings

Alexis Y.

Date: 4/14/2022 11:35:00 AM

WoW! Joseph, This is a good entry for the contest theme. I could just picture the whole scene. Best wishes in the contest. Have a nice day:-) Alexis

Joseph May
Date: 4/14/2022 11:50:00 AM

Thank you Alexis, Have a nice day :>)