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She was gone for the week-end, three days without Her Thinking safety in numbers, I went out with the guys The Brightness of her Blue eyes, her Flowing blond hair My LOVE was out of town, so I really Didn’t Care Will She LOVE me For the Eons of FOREVER? Or will I lose my most PRECIOUS LOVE? Her Smile enticing, “I’ll Pay you if you buy me a Drink” My mind was foggy, what could I do, I couldn’t even think Do I have a Woman that I LOVE Forever? I can’t remember Her name Lela, Lola, Lois, Lorraine, one more drink I might remember her name Will She LOVE me For the Eons of FOREVER? Or will I lose My Most PRECIOUS LOVE? Did I ever really LOVE Her? A name : Lenore, would anyone ever Know? That I would be Cheating on a Woman ,Where Forever LOVE would Grow In the Eons of Eternity; my Bride by my side, would my cheatin’ heart glow? Would my FOREVER and ALWAYS tell me : it is time for YOU to go Will She LOVE me For the Eons of FOREVER? Or will I lose My Most PRECIOUS LOVE? Inspired by Paula Swanson, for her Contest “Cheatin” Author’s Note : This is Fiction so I don’t know if it follows her Rules Honorable Mention

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Date: 9/24/2011 12:51:00 AM
I'm loving your poetry today, HG:-) Lenore, the joy of wonder in your words..of cunfusion ~. Should you go from your precious love? Love is a cycle that comes with remembrance. Lets share a drink.. and forget all about our cheating eyes,, by morning time you will know the answers to your heart... hehehheh truly enjoyed your wonderful artistic poem. The images run like a play through my mind.. Take care and enjoy ,..LINDA
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Date: 6/7/2011 6:15:00 AM
Hello HG and thanks for stopping by. I hope you are doing great and may God's blessings continue to reach you. -R
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Date: 5/23/2011 3:14:00 PM
Congratulations on the HM win in the contest of paula, HG
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Date: 5/23/2011 1:42:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement with this poem HG. Love, Mom
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Date: 5/23/2011 1:16:00 PM
Congrats HG my silent beau on your HM in Paula's contest with this excellent entry luv.. enjoy your special honor .."Sweetheart" always ..
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Date: 5/23/2011 1:12:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Paula's contest HG. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/23/2011 1:05:00 PM
Congrats, HG. Excellent piece. Nice going. Ralph
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Date: 5/23/2011 10:10:00 AM
HG!! well, i got carried away with your lenore..:)
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Date: 5/23/2011 10:09:00 AM
Kudos to you for the big win,lenore.. huggs
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Date: 5/23/2011 9:50:00 AM
HG, I know you'll always love Lenore. Well done! Congratulations on your success in Paula's contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/22/2011 6:47:00 PM
this is great nicely done..cory
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Date: 5/22/2011 11:32:00 AM
It is very intense and written very well HG my silent beau and much success in the contest by Paula ... knowing u would never cheat on your precious Lenore ... this piece shows your creative genius in poetry my friend.. wishing u a terrific Sunday as I continue celebrating my birthday which spilled over into today from yesterday.. your "Sweetheart" forever and always with luv..
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