Legos

The plain bricks two, four, six, and eight
in red and in white, were these days
left at the bottom of the crate
well hidden from the young boy's gaze,
now mesmerized by bricks in grays.
with stunning shapes and cogs and wheels
a kit that cost three hundred bucks
"oh boy, Han Solo's ship," he squeals
"the giant one, the max deluxe!"
As piece by piece from box, he plucks.

He built the craft in just two days
placed upon his bedroom shelf
it now does nothing; sits and stays
a thing of beauty in itself.

The plain bricks two, four, six, and eight
abandoned for a week or two
still in the bottom of the crate
the ones the boy thought he outgrew
were emptied out and sorted through.

And as he spied, the bricks all spilled
he thought of all the things to build.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Goldsmith Avatar
November 29, 2023 at 7:09 PM
Congratulations on your win. Your "Legos" is a fun/creative toy story/write. Love It... Have a great/wonderful day writing away...........
Miller Avatar
December 4, 2023 at 9:06 AM
Thank you so much Paula, you too have a wonderful day writing away!
Andresen Avatar
November 29, 2023 at 8:58 AM
- Congratulations on your win in the LEGO contest, Terry :) - hugs
Roper Avatar
November 29, 2023 at 8:18 AM
Well written poem, Terry, congratulations on your win.
Fowler Avatar
November 9, 2023 at 10:34 AM
I love this one Terry. It is so sweet with the outgrown "plain" bricks that seem to catch his imagination in the end. Wonderful! Linda :)
Miller Avatar
November 12, 2023 at 7:48 AM
Thank you Linda
Bauer Avatar
October 31, 2023 at 11:35 AM
nicely done, terry! my favorite line is "the ones the boy thought he outgrew." some things we never really do outgrow...
Miller Avatar
November 2, 2023 at 3:17 AM
Thank you so much, I appreciate your kind comments
Dietrich Avatar
October 31, 2023 at 11:18 AM
So cute how you did this. I am curious if we really have to write about legos. for that contest.
Miller Avatar
November 2, 2023 at 3:18 AM
Thank you Andrea, not sure about the Legos, but that's how I read it, could be wrong.
Meadows Avatar
October 31, 2023 at 6:26 AM
Lego is fun!! Brilliant poem. Enjoyed reading this. Well written.
Miller Avatar
November 2, 2023 at 3:18 AM
Thank you Jeanette
Rodrigues Avatar
October 31, 2023 at 6:12 AM
Those building bricks of all sorts. We had the simple kind when I was a kid. Loved building a house with its doors and windows. Even though it was simple it was satisfying. Someone donated a fantastic kit of legos when I was the afterschool director and that was a favorite for so many! God bless!
Miller Avatar
November 2, 2023 at 3:18 AM
Thank you Kim
Empress Avatar
October 31, 2023 at 4:56 AM
Reminds me of my sons toddler days, ah he loved legos, you’ve rhymes very well and written so well for this theme. Love the ending the most. Pleasure reading this
Miller Avatar
November 2, 2023 at 3:19 AM
Thank you so much for your visit and kind comments.
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