Leeches

I get haunted by things around me, Especially the leeches on my mind, They cling to me until I have no power, They creep up on me from behind, Will they ever let go of me!? I guess it's only myself that can flick them to flea, It's time I save myself now and discard from any negative identity, Haunted memories of the leeches shall never find me again.

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/10/2016 7:52:00 AM

- I enjoy reading your first poem, you write great Katrina :) - Warm welcome to Poetry - Soup :) - hugs // Sun :)

Moon Flower

Date: 7/1/2016 7:00:00 AM

That's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, Katrina. :)

Skat A

Date: 6/30/2016 10:06:00 AM

Katrina, Welcome to poetry soup, after reading this I know you are an Accomplished writer. Glad to see you enjoying it.. So much here. Flourishing among this community is easier than you think. Keep up the good work. *SKAT*

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/30/2016 9:54:00 AM

Katrina, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Pace Ink-U-Script

Date: 6/30/2016 5:50:00 AM

Love it....but what's life without sin or what does a perfect world consist of?..sometimes I think the same way but you expressed it much better...enjoyed