Leaving West Virginia

We came down from an evening 
hill walk
then made coffee
on the two ring cabin stove.

She said she was weary.
I said I was weary.
Wearily we sat there in silence
a strange discontent creeping 
across the floor rugs as the sun began to sink.

“Is it too late to drive home” you asked.
I thought about the long drive in the dark.
“No” I reply thickly
thinking that we just might forget
what we had not said here.

When two people enter a car
to drive into tomorrow
you never know what unspoken words 
might follow
or stay behind to sleep for the night.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Hankins Avatar
October 27, 2020 at 8:30 AM
This is a poignant little piece of writing that leaves the reader curious. It is full of thought-provoking imagery. Well-written!
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October 27, 2020 at 4:40 PM
Thank you LMH. Good of you to review this. Much obliged to you. e
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