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Leaving West Virginia

We came down from an evening hill walk then made coffee on the two ring cabin stove. She said she was weary. I said I was weary. Wearily we sat there in silence a strange discontent creeping across the floor rugs as the sun began to sink. “Is it too late to drive home” you asked. I thought about the long drive in the dark. “No” I reply thickly thinking that we just might forget what we had not said here. When two people enter a car to drive into tomorrow you never know what unspoken words might follow or stay behind to sleep for the night.

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Date: 10/27/2020 8:30:00 AM
This is a poignant little piece of writing that leaves the reader curious. It is full of thought-provoking imagery. Well-written!
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Eric Ashford
Date: 10/27/2020 4:40:00 PM
Thank you LMH. Good of you to review this. Much obliged to you. e

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