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Leaving Footprints

Leaving footprints Whipped cream clouds on strawberry sherbet skies reflect upon balmy turquoise waters rolling in the rhythmic cadence of our ever beating hearts In solitude we stroll down an endless beach framed by opaque weathered dunes and seashell dreams at the edge of white foam borders quivering Leaving footprints harmonic impressions, rippled patterns of love along a soft whispered shoreline longing passion’s embrace I kiss you, deep and lingering, quenching the thirst of my desires with moist ambrosial flavors of your warmest affections While meandering waves gently caress sand coated, tanned skin as we share our love beneath a pastel painted sunset sky, on a perfect summer evening Good night Soupers

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Charmaine Chircop

Date: 4/20/2017 6:19:00 AM

Those strawberry sherbet skies...A beautiful sunset . These words make me wanna stroll alone..close to the sound of splashing waves ...leave my footprints on the sand..and wait for spuming stars to shine...Mesmerizing .I am the one who wish to be able to write just like you dear friend.Lovely.

Charmaine Chircop
Date: 4/20/2017 11:41:00 AM

Step down?..Oh I like your humbleness Chris..It makes you shine and me smile.

Chris Green
Date: 4/20/2017 10:03:00 AM

Thanks so very much my sweet friend, but alone??? Evenings like this are so much better when shared with another. I am happy I got to share this poem with you. And you wish you could write like me???? Your poetry is so beautiful, why would you want to take a step down? :)

Elizabeth Kinch

Date: 4/20/2017 2:13:00 AM

A delectably, dreamy write Chris, I'm imagining myself on that beach! #7

Chris Green
Date: 4/20/2017 10:02:00 AM

Thank you so much Elizabeth. That is a nice thing to hear because that was my goal. I appreciate you my friend.

Darren White

Date: 4/20/2017 1:07:00 AM

I not often do (hahaha), but this time I agree with Vaso below me :) This is so beautiful Chris, that I almost wish it is ME walking there with you. Another 7 for you, my friend. Sleep well, and see you tomorrow.

Chris Green
Date: 4/20/2017 10:01:00 AM

Thanks so very much Darren and I'm glad you guys found something you could agree on. :)

Arthur Vaso

Date: 4/19/2017 11:02:00 PM

What is so beautiful about this poem, if I may be so bold as to say, you wrote the words, however, you live them as well , as I see by the kind comments you leave to others, thus making this poem more potent! a fav by the way!

Chris Green
Date: 4/20/2017 10:00:00 AM

Arthur, that is such a nice thing to say to me. I appreciate your kindness and your visits. Thank you so much.

Chris Hagy

Date: 4/19/2017 7:31:00 PM

My eyes are swimming in this colorful picture you poured out for us Chris!...beautiful! :)

Chris Green
Date: 4/20/2017 9:57:00 AM

Thanks so very much Chris for your kind words. I am thrilled you liked this one.

Anne-Marie Coreggia

Date: 4/19/2017 7:03:00 PM

This mesmerizing poem transported me right back onto Anastasia Island where I was not so long ago . . . that was pure heaven:) Amitiés

Chris Green
Date: 4/20/2017 9:57:00 AM

Thank you so very much Anne Marie. Your kind thoughts are always appreciated by me.

Jan Allison

Date: 4/19/2017 6:11:00 PM

wow I need a dip in the icy water to cool me down after reading the wonderful sensual imagery here Chris:-) hugs Jan xx

Chris Green
Date: 4/20/2017 9:56:00 AM

Brrr... :) Thanks so much my friend. I am happy this one touched you warmly.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 4/19/2017 5:56:00 PM

The ocean shares it's negative ions making blissful moments like this even more euphoric! Lovely Chris! 7 ; )

Chris Green
Date: 4/20/2017 9:56:00 AM

Thank you Connie for your wonderful thoughts. I appreciate you stopping by to read and leave such lovely comments for me.