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Leaving

I lie forlorn beneath freshly fallen snow; once a bridal veil, now a shroud. I will not feel the first spring rain. I will not feel the sweetness rush through me. Disconnected from the flow, prostrate; a fallen form freezing to a forgiving ground. Beside me, remnants of my former glory lean. Boughs plucked, pieces bent into the endless circle marked with a blood red bow. I lie dreaming now with the fallen leaves, a glorious memory of sunshine, songbirds, soft rain, and strong winds, swaying in the crisp fall air. As the last, remnants of memory bloom, a multitude of bright prismatic light and the sound of tinkling glass rises to bring me homeward, crowned with the evening star my fallen spirit rises.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 2/8/2009 5:55:00 PM
I enjoy the symbolism of the evening star in your synaptic stanza: quite hopeful of rebirth. This works well as a winter vision of future's brave past, if that makes any sense. Even as those nerve cells and memories get dulled over the years the mind reels in gratitude at the torturous gift of life. Warm regards, John.
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Date: 2/5/2009 2:27:00 AM
I'll take a stab at it - a red tulip? Very nice Deborah, love, Kristin
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Date: 2/4/2009 1:16:00 PM
Anyone know who's speaking? testing 1,2,3 LOL
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Date: 2/4/2009 12:41:00 PM
This is so beautiful Deborah, it paints such a vivid picture. Great writing. Laurie
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Date: 2/4/2009 8:44:00 AM
Deborah I really like the way this poem is written - Hopefully in my future I'll learn more of the old English like this - wonderful poem - God Bless, MJ
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