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Autumn Leaves contest by Jcb Brul ~ 10/12/24

There is a certain majesty that arrives in the midst of Fall when splendorous colors adorn Nature's change of dress. Leaves begin to shimmer in hues of russet, umber and gold. Like flames of fire, they sway as if gilded by September's sun, but beginning to show their age with dry and wrinkled skin. Autumn makes her appearance in Summer's last warm days. Her auburn hair has darkened to shades of deep crimson. Each strand a leaf, blown from limbs in a brisk breeze from trees soon to be stripped of their tattered gowns. They'll flutter and tumble, twirling round and round as if in pirouette by ballet dancers in a last performance. Their swansong grieves me, as to the ground they plumment. Seeing them withered and shorn, my thoughts are pensive as seasonal changes make me contemplate their tragic fate. Does Autumn weep for them as I do? Does she have a heart?

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Date: 10/25/2024 2:40:00 PM
I see your delightful work on the winners' list. I am so happy for you that it is there. Way to go. Congratulations. Sara
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Date: 10/25/2024 2:51:00 PM
Thank you for your kind thoughts, Sara.
Date: 10/25/2024 9:50:00 AM
Nice personification Lin. Congratulations! :)
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Date: 10/25/2024 2:50:00 PM
Thanks so very much, Linda.
Date: 10/24/2024 2:01:00 AM
Great questions, Lin, congratulations:)
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Date: 10/24/2024 2:10:00 AM
G'morning, Joanna and thank you very much.
Date: 10/23/2024 1:16:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful/lovely write. I love this time of the year with cooler weather/with all the pretty colors of russet/gold. Great Write... Have a wonderful Autumn day writing away.................
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Date: 10/23/2024 1:36:00 PM
Hi Paula. Thank you very much. I enjoy reading your very encouraging comments. It's beginning to cool off here in the South. 70s instead of 90s.
Date: 10/23/2024 12:38:00 PM
Lin, Congratulations on your deserved win, and it was truly deserved . Danny
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Date: 10/23/2024 1:02:00 PM
I'm delighted that you've found it so much to your liking, Danny. Merci.
Date: 10/23/2024 9:54:00 AM
Well done, Lin. Congratulations on your winning placement. Such a beautiful poem. Take care. Jim
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Date: 10/23/2024 1:01:00 PM
Thank you very much for reading me and leaving your kind comments, Jim.
Date: 10/19/2024 3:55:00 PM
Lin, you end this poem with questions that reveal your sensitive feelings. I think the people you deal with must feel very lucky having you present. As you point out so beautifully, the leaves undergo drama and transition that can seem remarkable. Smiles!!
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Date: 10/23/2024 8:53:00 AM
I'm late in reading your lovely compliments on this one, Duke, but your words are valued and appreciated. Thank you ever so much.
Date: 10/14/2024 3:22:00 PM
Lin, a beautiful fall poem. The leaves are beautiful until they fall into a mess. They do give us a colorful show.
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Date: 10/14/2024 3:31:00 PM
I don't get much of a beautiful display of color... mostly the maples change color. Thanks, Tania.
Date: 10/14/2024 5:14:00 AM
Another exquisite poem, Truly stunning, and without looking at the picture, your poem reminded me of the Pre-Raphaelite beauty Elizabeth Sidal, you have such a remarkable command of the English language, and a wonderful eye for detail. Another favourite for me. Danny
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Date: 10/14/2024 1:04:00 PM
I've seen her portrait and compared it to the Autumn in my poem. Thanks so very much for liking my poetry, Danny. Making it a favorite means a lot to me. ;-)
Date: 10/14/2024 1:31:00 AM
Beautiful, I aspire to one day write like this.
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Date: 10/14/2024 1:02:00 PM
Thank you very much for the compliment, Aysha.
Date: 10/13/2024 4:39:00 AM
Of all the artists mother nature is the greatest. Love your poem Lin. Xx
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Date: 10/13/2024 5:25:00 AM
That's true, John. No artist other than the hand of God could create such breathtaking scenes for us to enjoy. Thanks!
Date: 10/13/2024 12:46:00 AM
I really enjoyed this read xoxo
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Date: 10/13/2024 5:24:00 AM
Thank you so very much for enjoying this one, Aurore.
Date: 10/12/2024 1:34:00 PM
Another beautiful autumn poem Lin. Our leaves are just starting to turn now. Have a lovely time with your young guests. Tom
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Date: 10/12/2024 7:09:00 PM
Hi Tom. It’s been a great afternoon spent with all of them. Thanks
Date: 10/12/2024 9:30:00 AM
As beautiful a description of Autumn as I have ever read. Kudos, Lin.
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Date: 10/12/2024 9:39:00 AM
Thank you, Jim. Your response to my feelings of Autumn is the kind of reaction that every poet hopes to receive. Although it's my favorite season, I always feel sorrow when leaves begin to change color for it's a foreshadowing of their demise. I sincerely treasure your thoughts. ;-)

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