Leave All Worries Behind Premiere Contest Winner

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Leave all worries behind.
Repose in my caress
And gently close your eyes.
Be peaceful like a dove.
Sleep now, until sunrise.

Leave all worries behind
And come away with me -
Far from the maddening crowd -
To our private haven;
Our hearts be mighty proud.

Leave all worries behind.
Let's turn our backs on time.
Shangri-La awaits us;
So beautiful, so rich
It's worth a billion plus!

Leave all worries behind.
Let's roam with abandon
In the verdure of dreams
Where butterflies tarry
And float above the streams.


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A Brian Strand Premiere Choice Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Brian Strand
Date written: 08/14/2022

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022



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Date: 8/23/2022 10:26:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Edward. All of life is a choice to either wallow in worry or leave it behind. You emphasize this so beautifully with the contrasting phrases. Way to go! Blessings of peace and serenity to you!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 8/23/2022 2:02:00 PM
Thank you very much for the wonderful feedback and visit, Sam:-) Peace and serenity to you as well, my friend!
Date: 8/22/2022 7:13:00 PM
I took a trip through your trophy wins; they brought back memories of when times felt special and secure! "In the verdure of dreams" this also a treasure. Congratulations!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 8/23/2022 2:01:00 PM
Thank you so much for the comment and visit to my poems, Anaya:-)
Date: 8/20/2022 7:49:00 AM
A well earned Trophy win Edward. I really love the tranquility felt in this enchanting poem. Congratulations on your wonderful win. This beauty is going into my Faves! Blessings xxoo
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 8/20/2022 10:33:00 AM
Thank you very much for the wonderful feedback and fave, Connie:-)
Date: 8/20/2022 3:59:00 AM
Let's roam with abandon In the verdure of dreams. Where butterflies tarry And float above the streams.......Simply beautiful. So calming a poem. Congratulations Edward on your trophy win ! I am so happy for you.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 8/20/2022 6:11:00 AM
Thanks so much for the feedback and visit, Valsa:-)
Date: 8/19/2022 3:14:00 PM
I was browsing through recent results and saw your name. BIG congrats on your trophy win--it's not easy to win in Brian's contests--especially a trophy. Delighted for you my friend.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 8/20/2022 6:12:00 AM
I appreciate the revisit and congrats, Vijay:-)
Date: 8/14/2022 1:24:00 PM
Serene sentiments--an invitation to peaceful life. Emotions well invoked in longings.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 8/16/2022 8:46:00 PM
Thank you very much for the visit and feedback, Vijay:-)
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