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Leave all worries behind. Repose in my caress And gently close your eyes. Be peaceful like a dove. Sleep now, until sunrise. Leave all worries behind And come away with me - Far from the maddening crowd - To our private haven; Our hearts be mighty proud. Leave all worries behind. Let's turn our backs on time. Shangri-La awaits us; So beautiful, so rich It's worth a billion plus! Leave all worries behind. Let's roam with abandon In the verdure of dreams Where butterflies tarry And float above the streams. Submitted for... A Brian Strand Premiere Choice Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Brian Strand Date written: 08/14/2022

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Date: 8/23/2022 10:26:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Edward. All of life is a choice to either wallow in worry or leave it behind. You emphasize this so beautifully with the contrasting phrases. Way to go! Blessings of peace and serenity to you!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 8/23/2022 2:02:00 PM
Thank you very much for the wonderful feedback and visit, Sam:-) Peace and serenity to you as well, my friend!
Date: 8/22/2022 7:13:00 PM
I took a trip through your trophy wins; they brought back memories of when times felt special and secure! "In the verdure of dreams" this also a treasure. Congratulations!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 8/23/2022 2:01:00 PM
Thank you so much for the comment and visit to my poems, Anaya:-)
Date: 8/20/2022 7:49:00 AM
A well earned Trophy win Edward. I really love the tranquility felt in this enchanting poem. Congratulations on your wonderful win. This beauty is going into my Faves! Blessings xxoo
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 8/20/2022 10:33:00 AM
Thank you very much for the wonderful feedback and fave, Connie:-)
Date: 8/20/2022 3:59:00 AM
Let's roam with abandon In the verdure of dreams. Where butterflies tarry And float above the streams.......Simply beautiful. So calming a poem. Congratulations Edward on your trophy win ! I am so happy for you.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 8/20/2022 6:11:00 AM
Thanks so much for the feedback and visit, Valsa:-)
Date: 8/19/2022 3:14:00 PM
I was browsing through recent results and saw your name. BIG congrats on your trophy win--it's not easy to win in Brian's contests--especially a trophy. Delighted for you my friend.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 8/20/2022 6:12:00 AM
I appreciate the revisit and congrats, Vijay:-)
Date: 8/14/2022 1:24:00 PM
Serene sentiments--an invitation to peaceful life. Emotions well invoked in longings.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 8/16/2022 8:46:00 PM
Thank you very much for the visit and feedback, Vijay:-)

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