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Learner Surfer I am training myself to surfboard Practicing on my ironing board For I'm no loser And the best mover Shall win a trophy surfer award. So I've ironed my best underwear My motto is to always prepare If I have a fall I will not bare all And my assets won't feel whiffs of air. +*+* 18th July 2022 Limerick Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Lisa YY

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/3/2022 2:52:00 PM

Ha!!! Ha!!! How cute. I got a good chuckle. I hope that underwear will hold up under all that hot ironing. Reads like a good contender to me. Way to go, lady. Sara

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 8/3/2022 4:55:00 PM

I’m pleased you got a chuckle from the Limerick Sara, a chuckle a day keeps the blues away…Thank you, Belle

Susan Ashley

Date: 8/1/2022 5:33:00 PM

Haha! Your limerick is fun and fabulous, Belle. Such entertaining and endearing imagery! Warmest wishes, my friend.. ~Susan

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 8/3/2022 4:52:00 PM

Thank you for your thoughts and prayers Susan. Belle x

Susan Ashley
Date: 8/2/2022 7:13:00 AM

Oh Belle, I am so very sorry to hear of your anguish and of your husband’s continued suffering. I will keep you both in my thoughts and prayers. May your husband return to health and home to you soon.. hugs sent on wings of hope <3

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 8/2/2022 1:39:00 AM

Thank you so much Susan, you’ve shon a light o’er my day, I have my husband in hospital with an infection and I’m so anxious because he’s not fully recovered from the sepsis crisis, we were told it can take up to two years to make a full recovery. Fondest wishes, Belle

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 7/29/2022 10:36:00 AM

What a fun write and creative from quite a different perspective. I think this will take a top win. HUGS AND BLESSINGS, JENNIFER.

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 7/29/2022 4:32:00 PM

Thank you very much Jennifer, the poem got a third placement which I’m delighted to have received as there was so many great Limericks entered into the contest… Blessings and hugs, Belle

Bill Baker

Date: 7/26/2022 8:12:00 AM

Made me smile, Belle. Thanks, I needed that. Nice Limerick my friend. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 7/26/2022 9:53:00 AM

Thank you Bill dear friend, my Limerick making you smile made the writing so worthwhile… Blessings, Belle

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 7/25/2022 8:40:00 AM

That was real fun, Belle.

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 7/25/2022 5:38:00 PM

Thank you very much Victor… Belle

Gershon Wolf

Date: 7/23/2022 8:23:00 PM

This is treeeeeeeemendously hilarious, Belle. Just love it. Go, girl! ~ Surfer Boy

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 7/24/2022 2:19:00 PM

Thank you soooooooooooo much Surfer Boy, keep surfing… Surfer Girl

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 7/22/2022 7:35:00 AM

teehee - fun story - congratulations! Linda

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 7/24/2022 2:22:00 PM

Thank you very much Linda, even old girls just wanna have fun… Belle

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/21/2022 10:15:00 AM

this is really good. I hope it scored high. Congratulations.

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 7/24/2022 2:24:00 PM

Thank you Andrea, it scored a 3rd placement and I’m delighted… Belle

Christuraj Alex

Date: 7/20/2022 6:50:00 AM

Pure fun. Congratulations!

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 7/24/2022 2:26:00 PM

Thank you Christuraj, I’m am thrilled to have a third place on the score board… Belle

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/19/2022 12:06:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. A "Creative/Fun" write/story. Maybe you should learn with the ironing board closed. Don't break your neck or anything else. Have a great/blessed day.......................

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 7/24/2022 2:30:00 PM

Good advice Paula it would save a fall practising on an ironing board flat on the floor. Have a great day too, bless you.. Belle

Sotto Poet

Date: 7/19/2022 7:25:00 AM

Congratulations, Belle, for earning third place with a limerick that not only is rife with humor and irony but also flows nicely, as is expected of any truly excellent limerick.

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 7/24/2022 2:32:00 PM

Thank you so much Sotto, I’m pleased to have scored a third with my surfboard Limerick… All the best, Belle