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Leap and Fight

Having passed on to the night, the day New birth in the morning, a revival sway. Life, a relationship in flux, takes place. To a different planet, a new embrace. An awe-inspiring gift from the Cosmic Link Our "jump and contend" can't be in sync. Written: July 26, 2022

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Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 7/27/2022 1:39:00 PM

Your poem gives two sides, on that many believe and one far few believe. You explain which is quite enthralling i or cosmic link, however, i do like your last line as I agree with you all the way. An extraordinary contrast for 'OUR JUMP AND CONTEND' CAN'T BE IN SYNC'.Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 7/27/2022 1:28:00 AM

So full of contrast. And thought provoking.

Valsa George

Date: 7/26/2022 9:14:00 PM

Indeed each new day is a new birth, a revival and life a relationship in flux ! A lot, beautifully condensed ! Really enjoyed reading this short poem.

Michael Tor

Date: 7/26/2022 5:41:00 PM

Lasaad another marvelous thought and theme uniquely expressed and shared by you. Your writings are thought provoking and amazing.

Sotto Poet
Date: 7/26/2022 6:46:00 PM

Thank you very much, Micheal. I'm happy that you liked it, that means a lot to me. Blessings and regards.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 7/26/2022 12:56:00 PM

Awesome poetry my friend. Among your best, Lasaad. A FAVE from me for these splendid lines you wrote: Having passed on to the night, the day-- New birth in the morning, a revival sway-- Life, a relationship in flux, takes place.

Sotto Poet
Date: 7/26/2022 6:49:00 PM

Thank you very much, Vijay. I'm happy you like it and even happier by the fave. Appreciate it, It means a lot to me. Blessings