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The beauty of your life is so easy to see, In the colors and lines of your symmetry. After a time with the tree of your life, Severed from your stem by the wind as a knife. To ride the wind and swirl to the ground, To please another as your beauty is found. I can see in your color a purpose you serve, Formed to perfection, each little curve. Planted in rich soil, the tree grew quite tall, A steam flowing near, gave water to all. The roots, limbs and branches their part so bold, To bring out the best in the warmth and cold. But it is truly my solemn belief, A tree is most beautiful because of the leaf.

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Date: 7/18/2025 10:31:00 AM
Bill, what an amazing metaphor for every stage of life, every season of life, all experienced in community as a tree doesn't have just one leaf. We experience beauty through your words. Wonderfully done my Lone Star friend! Blessings to you as you create leaves of beauty.
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Date: 7/18/2025 4:00:00 AM
Beautifully crafted, Bill! The poem captures the delicate journey of life and the unique purpose found in every leaf. I love how you celebrate both the tree’s strength and the leaf’s quiet beauty—a perfect metaphor for resilience and individuality.
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Bill Baker
Date: 7/18/2025 2:21:00 PM
Thank you for your mindful comments, Rowena, it was so easy to become friends with you. May our poems often resonate with one another. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill
Date: 7/18/2025 3:14:00 AM
Bill, my dear friend, your sonnet poetry is excellent. It examines the beauty of life and nature, using the metaphor of a tree and its leaves to communicate deeper themes about uniqueness, purpose, and interconnectedness. The leaves represent each individual's distinct beauty and contributions, whilst the tree represents the overall life experience.
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Date: 7/18/2025 2:11:00 PM
Thank you for understanding the underlying theme, my dear friend. You really seem to get my poetry. Have a pleasant day! Bill
Date: 7/18/2025 2:35:00 AM
A well crafted sonnet Bill, I love trees any type, any colour, they’re a gift to the world… Beryl
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Date: 7/18/2025 2:07:00 PM
I agree, Beryl, Tree are wonderful. :-) Bill

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