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for the Micro Poem Poetry Contest of Ink Empress

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one gold leaf s e s i boldly r twirling above its fellow fallen, crumbling comrades while wind w a i l s a d i r g e

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Ink Empress

Date: 5/8/2025 4:01:00 AM

Dear Andrea, How beautiful and vivid is the way youv painted imagery and delivered your take on the prompt! I love how youv written this and also the arrangement of words is beyond impressive! Its soulfully moving and theres a story there within your word weaving! Thank you for sharing! Congratulations on your top win in my contest! Sending you light

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 5/8/2025 6:37:00 AM

thanks so much, Ink. I loved your inspiring contest.

Maclawrence Famuyiwa

Date: 5/8/2025 1:57:00 AM

Sweet imagery. Worthy all the accolades.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/8/2025 1:52:00 AM

- Congratulations on your micro poem, Andrea :) - hugs

JCB Brul

Date: 5/8/2025 12:48:00 AM

Oh, I love this one! Congratulations dear Andie! Stay sweet! ^___^ JCB

Robert Warlov

Date: 5/2/2025 8:52:00 PM

Ode to the Capitalists?

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 5/2/2025 11:36:00 PM

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/1/2025 4:48:00 AM

Creative work, Andrea. Good layout and great meaning. Thanks for sharing. Sara K

Nette Onclaud

Date: 4/30/2025 8:23:00 PM

wow...eloquently penned, andie...thanks for my high placement in your pleiades content; much appreciated!

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 4/30/2025 10:40:00 PM

Thanks. And you are welcome

Duke Beaufort

Date: 4/30/2025 10:51:00 AM

Andrea, great use of geometry as well as divergence of outcomes for a moment. I'm imagining myself outside seeing what you've described. When a poem creates an image in my mind, I know it's well thought out and uses words effective at conveying.

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 4/30/2025 1:16:00 PM

Thanks so much, Duke Inks haiku style with patterns inspired me.