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for the  Micro Poem Poetry Contest of Ink Empress

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one gold leaf s e s i boldly r twirling above its fellow fallen, crumbling comrades while wind w a i l s a d i r g e

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Date: 5/8/2025 4:01:00 AM
Dear Andrea, How beautiful and vivid is the way youv painted imagery and delivered your take on the prompt! I love how youv written this and also the arrangement of words is beyond impressive! Its soulfully moving and theres a story there within your word weaving! Thank you for sharing! Congratulations on your top win in my contest! Sending you light
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 5/8/2025 6:37:00 AM
thanks so much, Ink. I loved your inspiring contest.
Date: 5/8/2025 1:57:00 AM
Sweet imagery. Worthy all the accolades.
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Date: 5/8/2025 1:52:00 AM
- Congratulations on your micro poem, Andrea :) - hugs
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Date: 5/8/2025 12:48:00 AM
Oh, I love this one! Congratulations dear Andie! Stay sweet! ^___^ JCB
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Date: 5/2/2025 8:52:00 PM
Ode to the Capitalists?
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 5/2/2025 11:36:00 PM
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 5/2/2025 11:36:00 PM
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Date: 5/1/2025 4:48:00 AM
Creative work, Andrea. Good layout and great meaning. Thanks for sharing. Sara K
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Date: 4/30/2025 8:23:00 PM
wow...eloquently penned, andie...thanks for my high placement in your pleiades content; much appreciated!
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 4/30/2025 10:40:00 PM
Thanks. And you are welcome
Date: 4/30/2025 10:51:00 AM
Andrea, great use of geometry as well as divergence of outcomes for a moment. I'm imagining myself outside seeing what you've described. When a poem creates an image in my mind, I know it's well thought out and uses words effective at conveying.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 4/30/2025 1:16:00 PM
Thanks so much, Duke Inks haiku style with patterns inspired me.
Date: 4/30/2025 7:33:00 AM
very creative and original poem, enjoyed your inspiration,, good luck
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Date: 4/30/2025 7:13:00 AM
A library of wondrous poetry in a leaf...nature is amazing. Poets raking.
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Date: 4/30/2025 2:36:00 AM
- Creative, Andrea ... well done - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs
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Date: 4/30/2025 1:32:00 AM
I can hear wind wailing the dirge. Very ingeniously done. All the best, dear Andrea.
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Date: 4/29/2025 9:53:00 PM
Gorgeous. I am going to fav! :)
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 4/29/2025 10:23:00 PM
Thanks, Paige
Date: 4/29/2025 7:45:00 PM
It is a brief brilliance against inevitable decline.So nice !
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 4/29/2025 10:23:00 PM
Thanks so much

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