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Leading Light

Written: June 22, 2024 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Lovely, two-week luster. lasting sylvan smell,  lavender, blue, crimson, lilac, pastel light lifts people's mettle leading light is a liking illustration. loamy land leaning of landowners. Lubed language is silky and crucial. land lightly in people's whimsy locution of literalism logicality lasts for a lengthy time, if not longer. Lapis lazuli lanes link labor. limitless loop layout lends a look of light. lost from landscape left walls in flux. looking for love losing out learning to love may launch letting love lurch may be a loom. lift by living a loving life. lasting love is pulled to lead Living every day, listening to the wild. learning life lessons by laughing lifting lethargy, limiting lemons loving our Lord, love one another. love talk leaks recall, lie seal. loving recalls rekindle love's loyalty. lips locked, long-lasting. long, salty lacking friends. love, latch loss, live for those who care. looking for a soulmate alone looks cruel. limping life’s path, listening to voices. lambaste the bamboozled mind. laugh, scream your feelings loud Lustrous eyes reveal loneliness. lost will, loyalty remains. lockets and lullabies depict it. lyrics praise long, dull winters alone. lacking friendship, grieve less. Licensed to fix wrongs, omit loopholes of lies. lure rivals to confess, and learn their lies.

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Date: 7/3/2024 7:19:00 AM
SP, this is one "L" of a poem! You certainly can find the good and bad and all the emotions of life even in a poem where you limit yourself as you have here. It's making me smile.
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Date: 6/28/2024 12:12:00 PM
Lasaad my friend this poem is a masterpiece, a true form of art that none can dispute. The letter L used so cleverly to highlight love and life, loving an living, This write is. written with unbelievable imagination, which makes it all the more powerful. Congratulations Lasaad on POTD which is so richly deserved. Blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 6/28/2024 11:04:00 AM
Fabulous use of beautiful Alliterations Dear, Sotto. Congratulations on Poem of the Day.
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Date: 6/27/2024 2:40:00 AM
Congratulations Lasaad on a worthy POTD! Debx
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Date: 6/24/2024 10:44:00 PM
Wonderful - God bless you and Congrats on POTD. Love, Gina
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Date: 6/24/2024 10:21:00 PM
I love the beautiful, meaningful, alliterations within this masterpiece poem. Congratulations on POTD. Many blessings.
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Date: 6/24/2024 10:17:00 PM
Hi Lasaad, what a wonderful poem you have composed using alliterations as a string of necklace. With L words you have created a world of love where you stress the need of loving all, the world, its wonderful beings, flowers of all hues and above all God. I feel you are in love with L as it symbolizes the most uplifting quality- Love and as it is the first letter of your name. "Living every day, listening to the wild. learning life lessons by laughing lifting lethargy, limiting lemons loving our Lord, love one another."... So beautiful and meaningful. Sorry I missed seeing this as POTD. It's a well deserved honor and hearty Congratulations dear friend.
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Date: 6/24/2024 8:14:00 PM
L for Lasaad! Spectacular use of the letter, SP. What more can I say that everyone else has already said. Congratulations on POTD! "lambaste the bamboozled mind. laugh, scream your feelings loud" I like this line it's good advice. ~xhugs
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Date: 6/24/2024 7:32:00 PM
An alliteration, congratulations on POTD, Sotto. Penned perfect! Warm Regards, William
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Date: 6/24/2024 7:00:00 PM
Being surrounded by ' light ' is very uplifting, indeed. This is beautiful, tender and emotional, all at the same time. Congratulations Lasaad, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy
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Date: 6/24/2024 6:03:00 PM
Lovely poetry Sotto, congratulations on receiving the award for poem of the day… Beryl
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Date: 6/24/2024 4:55:00 PM
This is a darling poem. I enjoyed all of it. Congratulations on POTD again.
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Date: 6/24/2024 9:45:00 AM
An alliteration gem Lasaad, congratulations to you on today's POTD honour. Tom
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Date: 6/24/2024 9:11:00 AM
POTD WOOHOO! Correct me if I'm wrong but this could be classified as an alliteration, yes? No matter the label it is as sensual and flowing as a silk dress. Xo
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Date: 6/24/2024 8:17:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. I can smell your lavender. Very creative with "L" the first on each line. Have a great day writing away.....................
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Date: 6/24/2024 7:50:00 AM
artfully woven, this is alliterative mastery at its best
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Date: 6/24/2024 7:48:00 AM
Dear Sotto, many congratulations for this very impressive POTD. Like so many, I’m in awe of the perfect, constant flow of alliteration and especially all the lines beginning with the letter ‘L’. Genius! ‘Learning life lessons by laughing’ - love that line especially and the ending couplet. So much to admire here as always from your amazing, talented pen. So enjoyed reading it today. Thank you for sharing. Blessings to you :)
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Date: 6/24/2024 6:51:00 AM
What a beautiful read Sotto. Your use of alliteration creates a nice melody and meter. Your use of descriptive words were masterful, creating such beautiful imagery. A captivating and uplifting read. Congratulations my friend!! A well earned POTD!!
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Date: 6/24/2024 6:25:00 AM
4th verse was my favorite! Congrats, Lasaad, on POTD!
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Date: 6/24/2024 6:05:00 AM
Nice use of alliteration, Very nicely done, Congrats on POTD
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Date: 6/24/2024 5:54:00 AM
Sotto, impressive write so well written and congratulations on receiving the honor of POEM OF THE DAY, Constance
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Date: 6/24/2024 5:00:00 AM
Congratulations on your brilliant piece receiving honour of POTD. Focusing on the technique of Alliteration, and that with one letter "L" throughout, is a wonderful feat, and at the same time your poem inspires readers to reflect on love and life. Warm wishes, Dear Poet.
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Date: 6/24/2024 4:38:00 AM
Hey Sotto, I gotta say, waking up this morning and seeing your poem snag POTD made my day. it was like pure magic reading it. The way the words flowed so effortlessly. Congrats on getting POTD! Your talent for painting emotions with those beautiful word pictures is very inspiring. Sending you blessings, my friend. - Daniel.
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Date: 6/24/2024 3:13:00 AM
This is a very highly beautiful poem. Though written in free verse, it is full of alliteration. Congratulations!
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Date: 6/24/2024 3:02:00 AM
Lassad, nicely penned, congratulations on POTD.
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